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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it! More soon please! Sorry so short, but I'm in a hurry!
FanFic Addict,
K.T.
FanFic Addict,
K.T.
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're right! That was short!
Update reallyt really soon!
I loved it!
Update reallyt really soon!
I loved it!
schedule
January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great fic. Is Kagome mated to Sess or something? Love your fic. Please write more.
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, the honest truth. I liked it, but......I think you tried to cram too much into one chapter. I believe it would be even a better story if you backed up and maybe told how she came across the dragon and what rolsshosshoumaru had in it. How did she apparently become part/whole demon? I'm assuming that is what her change is. Don't take this as a flame because most definitely it is not. I usually don't write constructive reviews but I think your story has a lot of potential. Just slow down a little and tell how, what, where, when and why. I hope you continue it. I would like to read more. TTFN
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like it!!!! continue! continue!!!
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohhh i loved it so far great start...
but im kinda confused about da whole kag/shessy ting
was it dat when kagome wold go back she would be having an affair or something?
but im kinda confused about da whole kag/shessy ting
was it dat when kagome wold go back she would be having an affair or something?