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person Rawben
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa! nice use of the beads!!!!
person swasdiva
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Who in the world would be dumb enough to flame you for such deliciously sinful smut??? This has got to be one of the hottest Miroku/Kagome fics I've read. You've kept them perfectly in character; the naughty banter was beyond perfection. Holy crap, I loved this fic! If you keep writing one-shots like this I'm never gonna look at buddist prayer beads the same way again. Wonderfully hentai stuff!
person Fallen
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just love the religious references within Miroku's carnal dialogue! And as for the prayer beads...very innovative ^_^
person darkluvhanyou
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NO FLAMES SHALL COME FROM ME. I LIKE THE NEW USE FOR THE PRAYER BEADS, AND I LIKE SANGO BEING SMITTEN WITH THE TAIYOUKI OF THE WEST! MAYBE YOU SHOULD CONTUINE THIS...
person sairuh
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yeah, you've totally won on best use or prayer beads. you beat out some stiff competition too. i think the whole anal bead thing started iina,ina, if i remeber my reading correctly. so your story is historically possible too. but yeah, mad props.
person akumu
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
congrats. you did something i ght ght damndamn near impossible...you made me blush after reading this! lol, i didnt know if smut could still even make me do that(most things here are relatively light core compared to the claiming of beauty series in my book). i must say that it was wonderfully written, the coupling was very hot, and your excuse about sango being smitten with sesshoumaru is a coupling i myself would love to read about. i'm hoping you'll either make another 1-shot of San/Sessh or make another chapter in this story. you've got me sitting here with my fingers crossed for it matter of fact.
person No One Knows
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome!!!!! I hope you write more soon
person Mija
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooh I have read a few Miroku Kagome pairings..few mind you since there arent many out there and although I am a Kag Inu fangirl this was a totally kick azz one shot I really liked it you wrote it really well and I totally loved it..thank you for that and the bead thingy?? omg leave it to Miroku to come up with anal beads 5oo yrs before modern times..omg that was too priceles..huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person Hentai Jane
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Disgust? For this steamy pairing, no way!! I hope there will be a ch 2 with Sango and Sesshy!
person LilithQueen
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You certainly did! It the same as the Asian love ass beads that are supposed to heighten (it can be used on either sex) a partner's orgasm as the are slowly -PLEASE LUBRICATE PRIOR TO USE FOLKS,YOU DON'T WANT TO THE THE RECTUM-pulled at (or close to it) the time orgasm.But the beads need to big enough though-you have a creative mind-I bet you've seen"9 1/2 weeks";if not and you are hentai,rent it-you'll like it.Water play is fun too!!Very good though-I liked it!Continue!