rate_review Reviews

Hmm.. *says mischeviesly(Sp?)*I wonder whast's gonna happen?

Love the chappie! Hey, do you mind putting like a warning at the beginning of a chapter to tell us if.. you know.. there's a.. lime or lemon..

I love your writing style! What I like most about this chapter was that you made it sweet in the beginning, then it got sweeter and a bit dark, and in the end it got all sweet and kawaii! Everyone give her a round or applause! *everyone claps loudly(Some whistle)*

Awwww.. poor Kagome.. I wonder.. how screwed up can Inuyasha be?!?! Sheesh! They're suck chickens, don't they know they just hurt each other more this way?! Hey I just realized, that could be a good line in the story.. *grins*

This is when I say, wha-?I hoe it's not Inu.. wait.. what if it was?

Poor Kagome.. o well.ts hts hope doofus and butthead get there before anything gead..ad.....

OMG! I just realized! Sesshou.. was naked!!! *droolsss*

Awww... kawaii ending! Who would of thought that it would be so beautiful!! O and the summary, I don't want to seem mean or anything but.. PLEASE CHANGE IT! It kinda gives your storie a bad impression NO OFFENCE!! And Um.. PLEASE MAKE AN EPILOGUE AND A SEQUEL!!! PLEASE!! i PROMISE I'L REVIEW EVERY CHAPPIE!!!!!! And that's all I got to say.. *furrow brows* for now.. *gets happy* Thanks for the wonderful story! And I hope you do make a sequel..
~Melody
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P.s-*whispers* Your like the best authoress so far that I've known, as in read their stories! *grins* Chao! For now!

this is great. I absolutely loved it. And I enjoyed the brotherly relationship the Inu and Sassho had. it was humorous. awesome story.

hurry up and update this is my favorite fanfic of all time including all the ones on fanfiction please update soon or at least tell m u h u have any any other ones that i could read