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for Betrayal

by chickyMM

person mariah
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story so far*** it has a great plot too so upd8 it soon.
person KagomeKat15
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hola chica!!! Its good to see another latin american writting in here...not bad!! Could be more descriptive...but I sympathize for you, I know how it is with the 'language barrier', too. Good storyline, can't wait for more, update soon!!
KagoKitty
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person sailorgirl
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it and I hope you hurry up with the next chapter because I just can't wait to see what happens and what Kikyo does tgomegome.