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for Lust At First Sight

by divaeyez

person Bluesakura_Moonfire
schedule March 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this Afic. I like your other stories too. I hope you write more on Kagome and Sesshoumaru. They are truely a perfect couple. Here's a tip on a story: Try puting them on an elimidate t.v. show with Kagome as the main contestant and Sesshoumaru, InuYasha, Kouga, and Houjou as the one who wants Kagome and have readers review who they want Kagome to end up with!You could make NC-17 scenes in it and all and in the end you can write how the couple "is happy".

You don't have to listen to me, Arigatougouzaimasu for writing!
person Bluesakura_Moonfire
schedule March 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PS. If you do try to write that fic please email me and by the way I'm also Sakura M. Bluefire.
person unknown
schedule February 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
why change pairings... Sess/Kag is the best and pls. write more...remember sess/kag is the best...so KAWAII the both of them.
person Anata [yes, the one from mm.org]
schedule February 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*is a ditz* You know, I read parts 1 and 2 of this, but I never realized that you wrote it...maybe that's because I read it before I "met" you on the forums. Anyway, this is really cute. I was really upset the last time I tried to read it *can't remember where I tried to read it* because it didn't have all of it. It's nice to know where I can find the whole thing!! ^-^ ~Anata
person Aneres
schedule February 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
really great story!!! =D
person Aneres
schedule February 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
And u should definitely do a sequal.
person Silver Destiny
schedule February 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really likes your story! Are you thinking of m doi doing a sequal?
person Nicole
schedule January 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is such a good fic!!! I just read it a second time. I think you should SO make a sequel!!!! If you do please e-mail me and tell me I'd love to read it! Thanks. Ja ne. ^.^ Nicole ^.^
person Sakura M. Bluefire
schedule January 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is full of sweetness with all of its over protective guys, doesn't every girl wish to have a fairly protective guy? I has an air about it like its title which is a lustful and suductive air about it.I might not be good at reviews but saying that there isn't any other word to describe this story. The word would probably not reach this story's full potential like wonderful, spectacular, marvelous, and magnificent.I hope to view more wonderful fictions by you soon!
I just started to get a fan attack about Sesshomaru/Kagome so if its possible create more fictions about them in R/NC-17 onegai onegai onegai onegai onegai onegai onegai onegai ONEGAI ONEGAI! ARIGATOUGOUZAIMASU!

ONEGAI-(I think)please
ARIGATOUGOUZAIMASU-thank you very very much
person Phlie
schedule December 31, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Now this story is fucking hot! I LOVE Sess/Kag fics! More, more!