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November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wah I want to know why Rin is still alive!
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January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Happy to See You," Lady Detia's third story, is more or less a work in progress. Nevertheless, it's very well handled - the character interactions and scene blocking are very believable. The erotica scene is quite tactfully handled as well—even though it's brief there is ample sexual tension conveyed. The story as it exists is very heavy on dialogue, meaning that even people unfamiliar with Inuyasha may will be able to discern what's going on. In other words, this story is accessible.
And as usual, the writing is very tight, and typos are nowhere to be found - which is normaly a 'staple' of erotica. So once again, a well-done job (in progress) by Lady Detia!
5/5
And as usual, the writing is very tight, and typos are nowhere to be found - which is normaly a 'staple' of erotica. So once again, a well-done job (in progress) by Lady Detia!
5/5