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This is one of the best fanfiction's I have ever read. I would like to compliment you on the creativness of it. It is also very well written, it moves a a nice pace and when written from their points of veiws it is perfect for this story.

wow thats such a nice way to say your gonna die! Smile at him?! Sheesh! lol make lemons if possible? And update soon, this is REALLY good, very imaginative/creative...I like it a lot

I'm really liking it so far but I'm having some touble reading it because of grammer and syntax errors. Might want to pick up an english book or two and maybe even have someone else edit. Also, the perspective changes are confuseing. Might want to work on uniformity, there. Don't rush, either, that just leads to mistakes.

I really like what I've read so far and I think this could be a relly cool story but needs serious editing and revision. Spelling does not seem to be a problem and that's great.

Mind if I ask how old you are? email me at Shaid1979@aol.com if you'd like more commments.

OMG Sesshoumaru will lose his composer if Kagome dies, especially since im sure he realizes he loves her now! This was a sad *Sniff....Sniff* chapter! Oh Im glad U decided to UPDATE, I thought, "hey U get me into this vampire fic and don't update as often", I was soooo hurt!!

SEE I TOLD YOU! YOU ARE AN OSOME WRITTER!!!!!!! god I waited so long for this chapter, and it was worth it!!!!! OMg please update soon. This is a really good chapter. O, I hope that since kagome will either die or mate with reiishi then I hope she mate's with reiishi! THEY ARE SUCH A CUTE COUPLE!!!!! O, and by the way do you have a screen name? mine is Soacegirlval I would love to talk to you again.

xoxoxoxo,
~Panthera~

U Know if I were Sess I would wish for my father to be alive only for a few minutes just to let Kag kill him, because let's just face it Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha's father was nothing more than a "HE-WHORE"...LOL! He's caused these two more problems then they deserve in four life times!!!

THAT WAS FUCKING AWESOME MAN!!! FUCKING FABULOUS FABULOUS

I agree with RED hat, or whatever in the begining I was trying to avoid the Vampire fics, but now it is sooooo worth it! :)

make Kagome get with the dark one in the end! DONT DO A KAG/SESS fic.....theres way too many!!! PLEASE dont! Also, a Kag/Inu is good too b/c thats how its supposed to be, but a Kag/Reishi (forgot his name.sry) would be nice to provide variety.....but not Kag/sess....way to many of them...way too many!
AMY

I love this story. It's so good. I can't wait until the next chapter. Update soon.