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for In Da Club

by KagomeKat15

person chicky MM
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
god that was awesome, plz wanna read more and quick... Onegai ^_^
person Mija
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg I love this chap..dang Kagome's a bold one in this fic aint she?? me like that..Kagomes always the shy innocent type in most fics, nice to see her go after what she wants..hehe another great chap cant wait for more update soon k?? ty ty ty have a wondeerfull but safe New years eve gf much huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person jen
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
update, pleeeeeeaaaaaaaaassssssssssssseeeeeeeeeee??????? or do i have to get a whackin' stick, i don't like to torture the authos since i'm one myself(i'm not very good) but if you don't i'm going to go and find a whackin stick......... and then who knows what'll happen........... JA!!!!
person ish
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ARRRG! that was the worst place to end the chapter! i cant believe that cliffhanger, i'm so upset. I'm gonna kill myself now... just PLAYIN! i'll have to review again so everyone knows i'm still alive... it's just that this was so dramatic.
-Keep it HOT!
person Kaye
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You leave us at such eplacplaces!!! God my face is actually flushed form that dancing, that never happens!!!! Very good chapter, wonder what she'll say. Keep it up!!!!!
person Jai
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story can't wait for more!
person Allison
schedule December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is not a bad chapter, but add some more ,k^^
person Kisa
schedule December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good!!! Keep going Update soon
person Honkytonkchick
schedule December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great start to the story. it was great writing style. and only 20 minutes? well i am jealous.
person Kae Noel
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
love it, absolutely love it have ou seen charmed? I can't help but think of Piper's club with this... wow....