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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW!
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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Holy Cow that was hot!!!! are you going to continue it?
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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
my goodness i loved it! and ya know somthin thie fic would be good if it had more to it like say if she found out about him mabe being her boss and stuff. oh well just my opinion.
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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I usually don't read Sess/Kag pairings I am more of Inu/Kag fan But it was an awesome lemon!!!
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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was the horniest fic ever!! Did they even know each other???
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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was a totally awesome lemon!!! It is my absolute fantasy to have sex in an elevator with a guy!!! That would be sooo hot!! In fact there's this guy that I work with that I would just love to get dirty with in an elevator!! But anyways....nicely done between Kagome and Sesshomaru!! Keep it up!!
Inusgirl
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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like how you made it sound I mean most writers ive read i don't even bother reviewing because the writting itself it's so bad. It's as if they're putting their own opinions within the characters, and then the characters themselves don't seem like themselves anymore but rather someone else whose either the writer or closely related to the writer.
I like your story because it's highly original. I mean who would make up a scene in the eevator? lol It's really good!*nods happily* I reallu enjoyed reading it, and I liked how you used certain naughty words, usually ppl use words that others have heard before but words like "stretch" and other that i read were nicely put in. I really like your ideas and I hope you concider writting a full fledged series of your own in the INUYASHA section. It wouldn't matter what the paiing would be but I really like your writting, I like Seshy and kagome pairings, something for for all of us ya know? I haven't seen much of Sango and Miroku ones, OH! But my forever favorite pair will always be Rin and Seshomaru.
Another reason why i tell you your a good writer is becuz, theres a lot of people who don't check over their work.*point to herself* and I really like the way you looked over, i didn't catch any mistakes at all!!! I love the way you executed everything, and how you seemed njoynjoy the writting, it din't seeke ake a chore to you. I really enjoy wirtting that the writters themselves enjoyed, ya know? Welp, thats about all I have to say! hehe^^
I you ever have a new story out, e-mail me, i'd love it oh so much to see it! Your a cool writter!
~Ja Ne~
I like your story because it's highly original. I mean who would make up a scene in the eevator? lol It's really good!*nods happily* I reallu enjoyed reading it, and I liked how you used certain naughty words, usually ppl use words that others have heard before but words like "stretch" and other that i read were nicely put in. I really like your ideas and I hope you concider writting a full fledged series of your own in the INUYASHA section. It wouldn't matter what the paiing would be but I really like your writting, I like Seshy and kagome pairings, something for for all of us ya know? I haven't seen much of Sango and Miroku ones, OH! But my forever favorite pair will always be Rin and Seshomaru.
Another reason why i tell you your a good writer is becuz, theres a lot of people who don't check over their work.*point to herself* and I really like the way you looked over, i didn't catch any mistakes at all!!! I love the way you executed everything, and how you seemed njoynjoy the writting, it din't seeke ake a chore to you. I really enjoy wirtting that the writters themselves enjoyed, ya know? Welp, thats about all I have to say! hehe^^
I you ever have a new story out, e-mail me, i'd love it oh so much to see it! Your a cool writter!
~Ja Ne~