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by demonium

person Megan Consoer
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person wow
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i was looking through the inuyasha section for sess/kag fics and this is one of the best ones i'd read yet. i'll love a sequel of this so keep up the great work cuz they're really hot!
person Megan Consoer
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can yoite ite some more chapters.
person akumu
schedule December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very good! if you decide to make this more then just a 1 shot, let me know cause i'll want to read it!
person I am god
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn! Why did you end it there? It was getting so good! You could have added another scene or another romp. I agree with the other's, you need to add another chappie, babe. So far it was great. I might feel incline to send you an inspired pic. hehehe, you know you want it.

As to the other commenter, how could that 'little whore' do that? Hello it's Sesshoumaru?! I bet you would be his little whore too if you had the chance.


hehehe, vampy I'll see you soon.

Your heathen god
person ashley
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dang!!! That was a really great story. Although I would like to see you continue it and find out what happens now that Kagome and Sesshy have given into thier desire. I do have a question though: what does bani ga ru mean? You used it several times in your story and I have no clue what it means. Great job and interesting back story with the whole having to decided between sexual torture and being killed and revived. Great Job!! I can not wait for another story by you or another chappie of this one if a muse should strike.
person Naheta
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
well done, this could easly be turned in to a full story though.

Naheta
person kyoto
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
how could the little whore betray inuyasha like thaT