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awesome chapter, they better not break InuYasha and Kagome apart :( it would make me really really sad. i hope u update soon i need to know what happends next please!

Awwwww feel the love so warm and fuzzy. But what an ending! This should be very interesting we haven't seen anyone in action yet for a fight. I loved the thing about Inuyasha's ears and the cell phone that was so cute. Thank you for the translations I'm picking up Japanese from fanficts but your use of the language is kinda advanced for me but I'm learning with your help. Thanks ^__^

Those bastards! How can they even think of separating Inuyasha and Kagome!? Inu is right, she should've fried their asses! Anyway, I LOVE this story! I really, really hope they don't try to separate the bonded, cause if they do, there'll be hell to pay... You're doing an awesome job, keep up the good work!

Really enjoying this & looking forward to more. There is a bit of a goof on 1 of your translations for chapter 21 though; Temee- (teh-meh) Bastard. Nope, Temee is a rude form of you, we don't have a rude form of most words beyond voice inflection. In the anime if you watch it subtitled you'll notice that Inuyasha says temee a lot to Kagome in a growling or annoyed voice [especially early on in the series] & I doubt he'd call her a bastard.

i remember reading this story along time ago, guessing when u first started writing it. then i stopped reading fanfiction for a while but i'm back and can't get enough. i love this story alot though, everything about it i love, the whole soul bonding between InuYasha and Kagome i know they can make it. i can't wait till u update again i can't get enough ^_^, update soon please!

Well I like the story so far, but if 20 is supposed to be a chapter & not just a short authors note it didn't make it as far as being posted.

this is truely a great fic! it's just so interesting!!!! the characters are portrayed wonderfully and detailed! i really don't know what else to say but the fact that you have a wonderful and creative mind that you are blessed with! ( i really don't know what to say... I JUST LOVE YOUR FIC!) i like how the story is going so far, and how you have combined important characters in the story. also i love the fact that you but the pronounceiations and vocab stuff at the end... i'm starting to learn japanese! again i love your fic, and as always... UPDATE SOON!

Damn, ya got one right pisser of a story here. I paticularly like tiny details such as how you explain each action they take. the best part however is how that and your self-aware narrating style make it seem like your telling a story, not writing one. And thats what really puts this one over the edge from good to great.

Forgot some stuff last time, anyway. The world you made is pretty damn good. Again it seems real. Also you get in the characters heads real well.


Okay, I'm done rambling now.

I just love your fic!! The way you portray the relationship b/w Inu and Kag is perfect! I love all the little things--the way they greet each other when they've been apart, Inu bringing Kag her lunch--him giving her little kisses--and, of course, the hot, steamy sex ^_~ I hope you keep this up as the two grow together--your lemons are amazing! I like your story line, as well--a nice backdrop to their relationship as it grows---I, absolutely, can't wait to read more! Thanks for a great read ~ME