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November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Truly an excellent story you are writing and I hope you update soon.
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November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your lemons are really hot and I can't resist a good Inu/Kag one.
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November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update Please!
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November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was a truely fun story I loved it lol it's really cute how Inuyasha and Kagome act toward each other now that they are bonded ^_~ please update soon.
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November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update! I love this story, and now it's got all this plot and stuff. Cool =) Can't wait for the next update.
Btw, you either got the spelling or the pronunciation for the Italian name wrong. when "c" is followed by "i" or "e" it makes a sound like "ch" so it should be pronounced mur-CHAY-dehz CHEER-ah. For a "c" to have a hard "k" sound, it has to be followed by an "a" "o" or "u" Sounds funny, I know, but that's the way it is. =)
Btw, you either got the spelling or the pronunciation for the Italian name wrong. when "c" is followed by "i" or "e" it makes a sound like "ch" so it should be pronounced mur-CHAY-dehz CHEER-ah. For a "c" to have a hard "k" sound, it has to be followed by an "a" "o" or "u" Sounds funny, I know, but that's the way it is. =)
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November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I must say, I am absolutely adoring this fic so far. It's actu on on my Recs list.
I did catch a few typos that wonderful spell check must have skipped over, but other than that, it's great.
Though, I must comment on your pronunciation guide at the end of the chapterPartParticularly this last one. For "Temee" you had it as being pronounced "the mehh." 'th' does not exist in the Japanese language. And a random note for speaking Japense: The vowel sounds are kept short and a non-native speaker almost just has to cut themselves off, unless its a long vowel, and all that means is that the sound is held out for a bit longer.
But I do like the way that you make it so that everyone that is reading can at least somewhat sound the words out. And the definitions you give are very thorough. It's refreshing. It tends to bug me when authors just toss Japanese words into their writing and expects everyone to know what it means.
I couldn't really comment on the pronunciations before, because I had not taken any Japanese language courses at the time, but I am now. And I'm sorry if I sound a little rude or over critical. I don't mean to come across that way. The "th" thing could have just been because of spell check or a typo on your part. Either way, I wanted to point it out.
Later - CrashsAngel
I did catch a few typos that wonderful spell check must have skipped over, but other than that, it's great.
Though, I must comment on your pronunciation guide at the end of the chapterPartParticularly this last one. For "Temee" you had it as being pronounced "the mehh." 'th' does not exist in the Japanese language. And a random note for speaking Japense: The vowel sounds are kept short and a non-native speaker almost just has to cut themselves off, unless its a long vowel, and all that means is that the sound is held out for a bit longer.
But I do like the way that you make it so that everyone that is reading can at least somewhat sound the words out. And the definitions you give are very thorough. It's refreshing. It tends to bug me when authors just toss Japanese words into their writing and expects everyone to know what it means.
I couldn't really comment on the pronunciations before, because I had not taken any Japanese language courses at the time, but I am now. And I'm sorry if I sound a little rude or over critical. I don't mean to come across that way. The "th" thing could have just been because of spell check or a typo on your part. Either way, I wanted to point it out.
Later - CrashsAngel
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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent :) Keep it up :)
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September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a great fanfic please update soon
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ye gods!
I'm SO excited that you updated this story...I'd been afraid that you'd lost interest in writing further....and I was dying to know how Kagome would react to seeing Inuyasha for the first time. I can't wait for his reaction to her actually telling him how handsome she thinks he is.... itnds nds like that is the last thing he expects to hear from her!
You have such painstaking detail in your writing...it's truly a treat to read.
Please do update soon!
I'm SO excited that you updated this story...I'd been afraid that you'd lost interest in writing further....and I was dying to know how Kagome would react to seeing Inuyasha for the first time. I can't wait for his reaction to her actually telling him how handsome she thinks he is.... itnds nds like that is the last thing he expects to hear from her!
You have such painstaking detail in your writing...it's truly a treat to read.
Please do update soon!
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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great fic is this the last one or is ther more? I hope so, anyway update soon if there's more