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for Do You Love Her?

by serialcabbit78

person yuki059
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i like the story it start right off with her being in shesshomaru castle and having her memory lost and trying to remember
but however the chapters are very short and that kind of throws it a bit off, but over all i like the story so far. keep it up.
person Marieka
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH! Vast improvement! I'm realy getting into it now! Can't wait to read S'more!
person sam
schedule December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great prologue please countine if you dont a lot of people are going to be sad. thanx.
person Mija
schedule December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh oooh You have just GOT to update really really soon, why doesnt Kagome remember??? and whats Sesshy up to?? hmmmm must know, good start please please update soon K? ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-) btw have a great Holiday Season..
person Hentai Jane
schedule December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was way too short, but I liked it. Please write more soon!
person Marieka
schedule December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's short ... but I'm still interested, if you write more I'll read it. ;)
person akumu
schedule December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good start, you've got me very intrigued! please update soon!
person Anon
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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Yeah, you suck.
person Sullen Siren
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh thats evil.... I click on this fic thinking this ought to be a good one and then nothing..... meanie.....I look forward to reading it
person Little John of Locksland
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok... If your intent was to annoy people and permanently turn them off your writing then your decision to post a story that's entirety states, "Coming soon!!!" suceeded at least once. I can safely say I am never again going to be opening a story link when your name is listed in the author listing. I doubt I am alone in that decision either.