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lovin it please update soon and heres some fresh baked chocolate chip cookies and a box of milk bones for the guys enjoy!

INUYASHA IS SO NAIVE
HOW COULD HE NOT KNOW THAT
NARAKU WOULD RAPE THE KIDS


THANKS FOR UPDATEING
THE SESSHY IN PINK
HEHEHEHEEHEHEHE

AND THANKS AGAIN FOR THE SANGO AND MIROKU LEMON

UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!

is that hamburger i smell...? where's bessy? INUYASHA!!!!! (chases the hanyou who hods a sla ala and is wearing an apron that says 'kiss the cook') well... now that you have the cow, i guess im no longer needed to holf the milk for randsome, ill just have to have faith that youll update and not leave us hangin. i feel so bad for yumi, but what a nobel act to preserve the innocence of the children-- does that mean that naraku was gonna take them to bed or he was just gonna beat them? im scared of him, i cant go to the zoo anymore cause the baboons give me the willies. ok, now im just babbling. hope youre having fun with sesshy- tie him up and gag him with his own tail, he likes it (wink). see you next update,
~~0.o~~ byrd

Love it
LOve it
LOVE IT
Sango and Miroku finally
what a genius the way they told each other they loved each other
i tis so like mirou and sango to implynot say it straight out
Yumi and Naraku
this iswronwrong
and in so manhy ways
but it is your story!!
Naraku has to DIE

i hate to interupt such an escapade that i hope you are having with our leading men... but i just happen to have this ice cold, fresh, tall glass of milk here to go with all the cookies you recieved, but i guess i should have brought the hershey's syrup from the looks of it (wink wink, nudg nudg) i owe you a whole cow for the last chapter, but then i was thinking of a saying 'why write the chapters when you get the milk for free?' nodingding- my cows are your cows. mooo. wonderful chapter but i am worried for yumi... and excited for miroku. anxiously yours,
~~0.o~~ byrd

omg! i loved it please update soon. oh and heres a box of cookies *hands over box* aw hell heres the whole factory *gives keys to the factory* enjoy!

Hey some more cookiesd for you
i like the way that you make Miroku
sad because it is really the way he would act
and that he is so brave and excepts it and just lives life
good into to the next stage of the story

Update Soon

thank you.

i only have 2 words for you: got milk? well i do and im holding it ransome for more fluff. go ahead, enjoy your cookies... but sooner or later the crumbs will fill your mouth and it will dry up, youll need something to wash it down with... ok, seriously, i love the story and cant wait to see what happens. youve done an excellent job weaving 3 romances plus a battle or two, a party, suspence... amazing job. hey, dont let snooty reviews make you change your story-- go with your instinct. we'll all read anyway cause we love you. tell sesshy to keep his pants on and wait, his lemon is coming, and tell miroku to keep his hands away from sesshys tail in the mean time... im sure it makes our tai nervous (makes for a funny story break though- ive used it) take care.
~~0.o~~ byrd

i'm not very unreasonable, but i would be very happy to see the pairings before hand. i personally get confused when people couple kag with sesshoumaru and waisted some time reading this story. i'm not saying this is a bad story, but a little mention in the summery would be nice.