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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*BIG ASS TEAR* OH I FUKN LOVE DIS STORY NO WORDS TO EXPRESS IT DEAR GOD I LOVE WOOHOO!!!!!!!!!!1
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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like ur stuff very much hope u update soon u are a good wriighter send me i e-mail when u update
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WAHHHH! IT'S OVER! NO MORE DANCING BLADES! CAN U MAKE A TWO....PLEAZ! I CAN'T LIVE W/O KAG/SESS! WAHHAHHAHHH!OH, AND BY THE WAY, NARAKU'S END WAS PERFECT! AND WHO WOULD HAVE THOUGHT TO PUT THE SWORDS TOGETHER! ALL THE EVIL SLAIN, ALL THE GOOD HEALED! HOO HOO! THAT WAS A GOOD STORY! MAD PROPS! FROM THE DARKHANYOU HERSELF!
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December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok great ending
but what happend with JIn's mate what did she have?
Who in the hell is Kogas mate in this fic?
and again Great ending all three of them have their kids at the same time!!!!!!!!!!!
but what happend with JIn's mate what did she have?
Who in the hell is Kogas mate in this fic?
and again Great ending all three of them have their kids at the same time!!!!!!!!!!!
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December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwww!!!! *tear* ;.; i loved it very nice ending i enjoyed it emencely. keep it up
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December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
sniff, sniff- i cant believe its over!! im trying not to cry. well, ill be looking out for the sequel as well as any others that might float my way. take care and you know where to find me
~~0.o~~ byrd
ps: who is kouga's mate? did i miss it?
~~0.o~~ byrd
ps: who is kouga's mate? did i miss it?
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December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ye (cl (clapping wildly) well, sesshy, miroku?!? (all clapping wildly). wonderful- im glad i could help out, but damn youre fast- i cant get my story up as quick as you (blushes slightly) speaking of not getting it up...(eyes the taiyoukai irratably)
sesshy: hey! you put me under alot of pressure-- theres only so many times i can go in one night...
excuses excuses!! men are full of them, even youkai men. well, i guess a deals a deal... you can have them back. oh and i filled Ah Un's saddle bags with oreos-- enjoy!!
hey, if youre ever in the mood to read the story im trying to work on and am stuck on... lemme know, personification of fluff, i just love her pen name, is out of town and i have no one to ask me all the questions i cant think of.
kudos to the new chapter... no, not the granola bar mrioku. hey monk, hows a bout onst gst grope, for ol' time sakes?
ahhh, much better... see you next update.
~~0.o~~ byrd
sesshy: hey! you put me under alot of pressure-- theres only so many times i can go in one night...
excuses excuses!! men are full of them, even youkai men. well, i guess a deals a deal... you can have them back. oh and i filled Ah Un's saddle bags with oreos-- enjoy!!
hey, if youre ever in the mood to read the story im trying to work on and am stuck on... lemme know, personification of fluff, i just love her pen name, is out of town and i have no one to ask me all the questions i cant think of.
kudos to the new chapter... no, not the granola bar mrioku. hey monk, hows a bout onst gst grope, for ol' time sakes?
ahhh, much better... see you next update.
~~0.o~~ byrd
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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is turning out 2 be a great story
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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hehehehehehehehehehehehehe... you two are in my world now!!! what a time we will have (miroku rubs his hands together and sesshy raises an eyebrow)
i'll be happy to keep these two busy until your writers block passes (lick my lips) but theres something my friend 'personification of fluff' did for me once, and i try to pass on the favor as often as i can. ready? here goes:
naraku is not dead, is he near? did he witness the battle or did he only senduppeuppet while he was hidden? will he will want to wait and regroup his demons or will he attack while the lords are on the feild and weakened? are his desires for yumi still driving him? will he use kohaku to lure her back?
now that inuyasha and yumi are reunited, will he accept kanna in as is own as he had done with shippou... hey, where has shippou been? and rin? looks like theyre gonna need a daycare at the elven castle. what will inuyasha say about the night spent with naraku? will yumi even tell him unaware that he already knows? did naraku leave a mark on her that inu will see? will he understand or will he be so inraged that he does something stupid? what about the baby? does she have it right away or is that for later?
sesshy and kagome have become neutral characters, out of the action... does that change? the there something that brings them back into the spotlight? does kagome stand against her mate in some decision? is a trap lain for the two of them by naraku? does he use her to weaken the lords since she is tied to the elves, sesshy, inu, and miroku? do they get nasty again (wink)? is sesshy still pink? i dont think i saw the spell lifted... hehehe, that would be funny if he had just fought naraku and he was pink. will kagome cast a spell that cuts the back of his kimono off so as he walks away all stoicly, his cute little butt is wide open for the viewing? hehehehe.
ok, kagura is with them now, but can she stay? naraku still holds her heart but will she remain untill called back or will she go soon? will she become a spy for the lords now that kanna is with yumi and the mirror is broken? will kouga forgive her for their shaky past? will another romance blossom? will she stay for a celebration feast at jin's palace and let the girls give her a makeover like they did to kagome in the beginning?
what about sango and miroku? will there be a wedding? will they make it a joint celebration for them and the battle? it seems like there should be some sort of contest- a battle of the sexes if you will now that you have 3 couples- something the women stand against the men on... be it serious or in good fun, i cant tell... just seems like a thread i really want to pull- an itch i really wanna scratch.
anyway... i dont know if it helps but it works for me... kinda gets my head back in the game and sometimes i get some good suggestions that turn me in a whole other direction. im actually sitting on a story like that now- i have no idea where to go, thasts why im so quick in responding to you... i have nothing better to do when i cant write. maybe this'll get your juices going... if not, more time for me to spend with the boys (looks on either side to see them fanning me with large feather fans in little spedo uniforms) life is good! oo, are those grapes? miroku, im too weak to pick them up... will you feed me? hehehehehe...
lemme know...
~~0.o~~ byrd
i'll be happy to keep these two busy until your writers block passes (lick my lips) but theres something my friend 'personification of fluff' did for me once, and i try to pass on the favor as often as i can. ready? here goes:
naraku is not dead, is he near? did he witness the battle or did he only senduppeuppet while he was hidden? will he will want to wait and regroup his demons or will he attack while the lords are on the feild and weakened? are his desires for yumi still driving him? will he use kohaku to lure her back?
now that inuyasha and yumi are reunited, will he accept kanna in as is own as he had done with shippou... hey, where has shippou been? and rin? looks like theyre gonna need a daycare at the elven castle. what will inuyasha say about the night spent with naraku? will yumi even tell him unaware that he already knows? did naraku leave a mark on her that inu will see? will he understand or will he be so inraged that he does something stupid? what about the baby? does she have it right away or is that for later?
sesshy and kagome have become neutral characters, out of the action... does that change? the there something that brings them back into the spotlight? does kagome stand against her mate in some decision? is a trap lain for the two of them by naraku? does he use her to weaken the lords since she is tied to the elves, sesshy, inu, and miroku? do they get nasty again (wink)? is sesshy still pink? i dont think i saw the spell lifted... hehehe, that would be funny if he had just fought naraku and he was pink. will kagome cast a spell that cuts the back of his kimono off so as he walks away all stoicly, his cute little butt is wide open for the viewing? hehehehe.
ok, kagura is with them now, but can she stay? naraku still holds her heart but will she remain untill called back or will she go soon? will she become a spy for the lords now that kanna is with yumi and the mirror is broken? will kouga forgive her for their shaky past? will another romance blossom? will she stay for a celebration feast at jin's palace and let the girls give her a makeover like they did to kagome in the beginning?
what about sango and miroku? will there be a wedding? will they make it a joint celebration for them and the battle? it seems like there should be some sort of contest- a battle of the sexes if you will now that you have 3 couples- something the women stand against the men on... be it serious or in good fun, i cant tell... just seems like a thread i really want to pull- an itch i really wanna scratch.
anyway... i dont know if it helps but it works for me... kinda gets my head back in the game and sometimes i get some good suggestions that turn me in a whole other direction. im actually sitting on a story like that now- i have no idea where to go, thasts why im so quick in responding to you... i have nothing better to do when i cant write. maybe this'll get your juices going... if not, more time for me to spend with the boys (looks on either side to see them fanning me with large feather fans in little spedo uniforms) life is good! oo, are those grapes? miroku, im too weak to pick them up... will you feed me? hehehehehe...
lemme know...
~~0.o~~ byrd
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December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey Great chapter
you know i think you could develope the relationship between koaga and kagura
there seems to be somethign there
and great job on ho9w Naraku was in kohaku just like the second movie
Great job Keep writing
can't wait
please hurry
you know i think you could develope the relationship between koaga and kagura
there seems to be somethign there
and great job on ho9w Naraku was in kohaku just like the second movie
Great job Keep writing
can't wait
please hurry