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for Red and Amber

by burningbritelyone

person Iyasu
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*is speechless* ... Wow... Wow... man, that lemon was so good that I feel like it would be a sin not to read the acutal story. *goes to find it if it's here*
person Serenity
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can not believe I just read a Iun/Kag lemon fic! is disgusting! when i frist saw the title i thought it was a nara/inu fic because naraku's eyes are red and inuyasha's eyes are amber but noooooooo it had to be a inu/kag fic! why dont you just write the title as for goodness sake! i'm ok i just have to find something last disgusting to read lika a inu/kik fic or something. and i cant believe you used haunted as the sequel title I mean c'mon! the song dosen't even fits them! if they were ever together that is! Oh and just to let you know i hate kagome!
person Anya3
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Daaaamn! Ok, im a serious critic of Inu/Kag fics and usually im all over people about certain things but...daaaaamn! *stands and applauds* I dont think i've reabettbetter intimate scene between the two in a long LONG time. Im giving ya a ten for keeping on track and a wonderful sense of the Kama Sutra *winks* You go!

Anya
person CryinAngel
schedule November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooh la la! such agressive young love!
keep up the great work!
person well done
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
a very engaging lemon, and hot, too...well done
person Not a perv
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey we arn't pervs here, we arn't just out for a dirty story. We just like to be able to have adult content in our storys and not get annoying people telling us we shouldn't write naughty stuff. So bring the rest of this story on over here, I know I would love to read the whole thing ~_^
person France Gamble
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is real good. I like the detail and the way you depicted both of their personalities. I'll have to go check out your story on ff.net now. It seems like it might have a wonderful plot.

France
person Hentai Jane
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
No that is an official panty creamer!!;) Loved it and I hope you post more chapters here!
Hugs
HJ
person GgBg
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hot, Hot, Hot!!! All I can say is "My god, I wish I were Kagome!!! Update soon, Update soon, Update soon!!!
person ME
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God!!!!! that was absolutely INCREDIBLE!!!! you have a great gift for writing lemons--I read the first 2 chapters on FF.net (which were great!! don't get me wrong!!), but this chapter was fantastic!!! You tend to read alot of so-soons,ons, but I was VERY pleasantly surprised by yours!! please say you'll write some more 'cause I can't wait!!!!