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WOW that was really good but the ending was sad poor hojo has no one now but at lest sesshy ands inu can be together. ^_^

such a sad ending.....poor inu poor seshy....very good fic...awww...so sad.....*gives it 5 stars*

ok im at chhapter 6 and besides the parts with naraku and everyone evil(lol) i think its funny,sexy,hot, and without the evil the fluff would have less of an effect.

*blink blink* I sure in the hell wasn’t expecting that ending. WOW!!!
I read all of this in 1 sitting.. The lemon’s were hot!! Kinda dark there at the end. .but I love the dark stuff...I liked it..did give me chills at the end though...
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what happened? the story was going great and than what you got bored?

O_________________________________________________________O Th..... The ending it was so.... So Abrupt..... Omg.... o.o..... Um..... that was evil... .o.o.;;;; very evil..... Um...... Make an alternet ending.... .o.o. Inu-chan.... and Sessy-poo... are.... nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *cries* *sniffles* Alright, end the fic like this .>>. You owe me another ficcie!!!! T.T The poor guys..... SESSHOU AND INUUUUUUUUUUUU NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! T____T *runs away and cries in room*

TTFN.... Ta Ta For *sniff* Now...

SESSHOU!!!!!! INU!!!!!!!! T_____T

OH MY GOD WHAT THE HELL WeRe you thinking! Okay calm down, whew but what ever why did Sesshomaru had to die first that's all I ask WHY!? HMMM, oh my any who the PICS in the mail as you received it. Also to coancaancat it really wasn't that serious, we all know it could have gone better as it did. But what could you do, it was yaoigirl's choice I didn't see you give any suggestions to 'help' the story sort of speak. As known I'm trying to keep my cool-but that doesn't concern you-anyway as I was saying you could have been more NICE, considering yaoigirl's first fic. But anyway enough of you "YAOIGIRL!" said with malice "Sesshomaru and I would like a word with you!" Drags yaoigirl to sercret chambers...TBC

Ok,you had mel thl the last chapter.What the heck were you thinking anyway,waited forever for another chapter and you kill them off.There
were so many ways to go with this story and you couldn't think of just one?You had the 3 way love triangle between Sesh,Inu and hojo to
explore plus a kidnapping with all the girls and Neuaku.Plus more on how Inu and Sesh felt for each other.What A Disappiontment this
turned out to be.

:(

i think u hav a great style of writing but i HATE THAT ENDING !!!

WOW! I mean okay, so um can't wait till the last chapter and I hope nobody dies...:(( Anyway I made a pic for the story and I email it asap-Well when I finish coloring it. I NEED ANOTHER RED PEN DAMNIT! Alright talk to u later girly.