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for Entwined

by Yanitza

person kagoma
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HEY GUH!!!! LONG TIME NO TALK!!!!! GUH CHU'R STORY GREAT!!!!! :P BUH IM SURE CHU ALREADY KNOW THAT SINCE I WAS THE FRIST TO READ IT...LOL...
person Mija
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg that was totally awsome a sweet romanctic lemon I soo loved it, had a bit of angst in the begining which was real nice btw and then the romance and the lemony goodness..great work ty for that..much huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person Ickabod119
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Perfect Lemon for the perfect couple. Well written can't wait tell you write more!!!
person quirkyslayer
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Niiiice.....I enjoyed it very much. Keep writing, you're doing very well.
person Henati Jane
schedule November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was a good lemon! Do you plan on writting one with Sango and Miroku? I know Sango slapped Miroku at the end, but she can always change her mind, right?;)