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for Kagome! Where are you!

by jeffshelton

schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I...just...LOVED THIS! :-D ^_^ * does a happy/victory dance * Great, great chapter! I am a BIG Star Wars fan and this is just as wonderful as I imagined it would be! ^_^ I can't wait for the next chapter! Until the next time! ^_^

* continues her happy dance * ^_^
person blackshadowfox
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
damn jeff, that chapter was bomb. Made me laugh to how you had sess challenge everyone. Was a very good chapter and i cannot wait for you to update again. Also on a shard to kyoto.

Laterz
person blackshadowfox
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
damn jeff, that chapter was bomb. Made me laugh to how you hass css challenge everyone. Was a very good chapter and i cannot wait for you to update again. Also on a shard to kyoto.

Laterz
person amanda
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i donot think if this part of the story star wars will fit in story from star wars this is to far in the movie . but it is not going to be good it there are to many parts to the star wars story line in kagome were are you i t may maybe 3 more chapter if you go with this story line
person amanda
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i donot think if this part of the story star wars will fit in story from star wars this is to far in the movie . but it is not going to be good it there are to many parts to the star wars story line in kagome were are you i think maybe 3 more chapter if you go with this story line
person snowcat
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*claps for new story arc!* Lots of thoughts arising, like it's probably not a bad idea for Sessh not to get involved, cuz he'd be more likely to admire Darth Vader( I'm assuming for copywrite purposes that you've spelled it Vad"a"r), and thinking over "Attack of the Clones", an army of "Sesshes"...O_o *gulp*nd cnd could R2D2 give the cube a try since "he/she/it"? has bn con codes getting through "doors"? But as for some of your other spelling/grammar errors; one whole chapter you had cheek spelled check, lol, as for this chap only a few, feel instead of fell, and say instead of stay. But don't let that bug you , it's just a critique. So on with MORE!, MORE! PLEASE! Thanks
person KhellendrostheDragon
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, finally I am all caught up...I love the story J I t I think it's great that you are taking Kagome and Sesshomaru and dropping them into different worlds. It gives everyone a chance to see them outside of the normal IY setting. Keep up the awesome job and I look forward to the next chapter.

See you later;
Khell
person Marieka
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have had to play catch-up again

I was surprized by how much I have enjoyed Sess & Kag's stay on the island.
And now on to bigger and better namely Endor!!! YES!!! (((hug))) I love you!

Its about time Inuyasha told Kagome's Mom.
Inuyasha is not going to take this new development very well. *sigh*

Cant wait to read S'more!
person Lady Tennyou
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey! you know when Sesshy said that he could teach Kagome how to shapeshift? seeing as how his giant dog form would never be able to fit Kagome, you could have him teach her a spell to where she is maybe a giant dog herself? just an idea lol keep writing i enjoy all your fanfics!
person KFC
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, please get another up soon. Man, my reviews are short ^_^