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The heck?! Kagome, evil?? Man, that really took me by surprise. It's messed up. I love it. I can't wait to see what happens!!

Oh my...! * tries to form cohernt thoughts and sentences * Oh...yeah! Whoa! Um yeah....* ahem *

* blink blink * Untixt txt time? O.O

* sits shocked with mouth a gape * ... ... ... WOW ... ... ...

that was... wow... but interesting, BTs ses sess gonna go full demon anytime soon???

Hi Jeff, Ok,first off I think the storylines and the sneak peeks at each was awesome.You have definately piqued my curiousity with the teasers you left. Loved the last chap...especially the part about the broken bed, the worn out cat and Sess claiming that he was 'just resting his eyes'...that was too funny! Looking forward to the next chapter. ^_^

See you later;
Khell

All those other world ideas are awesome, and frankly, I want to see all of them. But here's a quirky idea I got. Send them to The Pirates of the Carribean. What will Sess do when he can't kill them? When they want Kagome? I'm posting my own story soon too. I hope you might read and reveiw. I really love your writing. G2fly,

~Ana

You have some serious talent and the sheer enormity of this story leaves me in awe. The one piece of constructive criticism, I would like to give you is.......words like, "jaded gate," "flute," and "peepee" greatly reduce the eroticism in your lemons. If your not comftorable using more sexual terms.....for example, instead of "cock," you can just say, "You've never tasted a man before?" Anything but, "You've never sucked a man's flute........" Some terms, vulgar as they may be, in a lemon are sexy. I can't wait to see how you handle the love triangle when they finally get home, I can't see the whole "sharing Kagome," theory working. Personally I'd have to say adios to the dog-eared geek, lol, but that's just me.

Good story, but kinda sucked with that tentacle chapter. other than that, pretty good

*GASP* *GASP* Don't mind the cliffy this time *nearly passed out* need time to recover, so, if you'll excuse me, I need go up for air!.............. So , your going to let Sessh get off the hook from his conviction for dog demons not to degrade themselves by having 'recreational' sex with a human? Since you turned the secretary's group into demons, and sailor girls are unique humans with special powers such as Kagome, he therefore doesn't violate any of his integrity. With all that sex sure comes some gruff language. Thanks for your story..."Rocks My World"

The interlude helped bring a better closure to the star wars story arc.

IF you do decide to go into more detail about the other worlds could you do the american west? That one sounds the most interesting to me. I really love your plot and style of writing.