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for Kagome! Where are you!

by jeffshelton

person Amy
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i hate u, u know? u keep on leaving us hanging! u better freaking hurry up with the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person ......Not important....
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good story please keep on writing!
person Manda
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man, you are freakin evil to leave a cliffhanger like that!!!!! How could you?! You better update soon!!! (yeah, I know the schedule is Tuesday, Thursday, Sunday, but that doesn't mean I can WAIT until Thursday!!!) This might be one of my favorite chapters!!! Have you ever been published? You really should be, if not. In fact, if some publisher rejected you, then that's a crime. Keep writing!
person alaina
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cool this story is getting even better and that hentaii world was NASTY!!!! oh well i read it n e ways but still *shudder* yeah well update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Manda
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, as usual. I always look forward to reading your updates and stories. This chapter was a little warped, what with Kagome's dad being around and selling her and her moms's bodies. Just the idea of Kagome being evil is twisted. Makes for a intersting twist in the plot, though. Keep up the good work!
person me
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmm soooo whats goona happen when kagome and kagome meet hmmmmm?
person sesshomarusgirl56
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW................ (HEAD SPINNING IN CIRCLES) THAT.............. WAS JUST WOW!!!! I MEAN HENATI WORLD WOW!! GREAT FIC THOUGH (STILL IN DAZE)
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was an interesting two chapters I must say. I think the Good vs. Evil plot line is going to be mighty interesting indeed.... :-) Until next time! ^_^
person migele
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was fun.

I didn't like the hentai worl to much.
well...
being who I am I still read it all.
Will kago be able to use the sexual magic? that could have some very funny effects in future worlds...

looking forward to this world.
(I didn't want to spoil myself anything.)

migi
person Bill the surly.
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I didn't read all this.. in I s I started skipping chapters.. because they seemed to be an exercise in tedium. The force is strong with Kagome...o-kay. Good to know she'll use that power for evil..stealing. Dark side stuff there. Then again I have seen Kagome in this story yet. I've seen this trampy, in denial person that calls herself Kagome and thinks she's traveling with Sesshoumaru. Did the cube sap Sesshoumaru's brain cells as well as his true personality? It is possible to write a Sess/Kag romance in which the character's remain IC.

Pise ise it was an interesting idea. Still..plotwise it's lacking. When one can skip 30 chapters straight and still know what's going on...there is a problem.