rate_review Reviews

well your fic is interesting , but your verb tenses are ....well ...bad . you REALLY need a beta reader. keep up the good work .it iis really interesting.

OMG that is SOO good! I love it. but you are mean for stopping there! You have to update soon. As with your other stories that I have read, I jusn'tn't stop reading, you use the perfect blend, between the correct grammar and punctuation, your attention to detail, and the fact that you keep the characters in character, or at least believably so for the situation that they find themselves in, and you build up to that crucial moment, like the evil author you are! ok see you in reviews! dragonflyelj