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Great story. Hell I like all your stories. I hope to see more soon. best wishes.

~V~

good timing! i have been looking about for your story for 2 days now. i didnt even remember the title of it either, just what it was about. anywho, this is all very very interesting. i hope you update quicker then what it took for between chap 4 and 5!

ps: if it turns out they are on planet Hoth as a Star Wars geek i wont know weither to piss myself laughing or groan...

i love the storie so far and i've beaitiaiting for the next chap for a bit now so please update soon and i'm sure everyone can agree wuth me

Hm... This is very interesting. I reallly love to see how this ends up. Please continue.
Katie

...MAKE ME PACE,...MAKE ME PACE! So far your story's pace is just fine, building heat (like in "Backdraft"), starving to explode upon the first waft of oxygen. Some peeps are asking for SEX already? They just don't know how to savor the tension in the story. Luv you having Kag admit she's not addressing Sessh's "pedigree" properly, according to the series in my book anyways. Your Sessh charaterization is holding my attention too; testing thoughts, becoming more vunerable to his mental ba tha than with his environmental one, and whom doesn't know that he's narrow minded and controlling. One question tho; Is this story following in a time line after your other story, "Spring Festival"? Cuz, with or without trust, it just isn't believable to me that a virgin would be as unerved as you have Kag as she's being massaged by someone whom she knows to be an agressor. Thanks for listening.

nice, touch of humor jeffs-sama, did I ever told you i'm one of your biggest fans, ( AKA NO_TAMA, or NEO QUEEN), it's a pitty, I'm not going to be able to read your work until january the 10th, but, until then I wish you farewell.

Ja Ne

HEEEEELLLLLLOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
by the way your fanfic is great keep up whit the good work....ok.....
and keep writing more because mw wanna know more about sesshomaru and kagome ok.....

hi that was great this is my first reveiw!! ne wayz i loved it so far but i can't wait to see inu's face when he finds out. and question: are they going to fall in love? sounds as though they're having an akward time ajusting to one another, no?

write soon
ja nee ~*~Mia~*~

Very interesting. I honestly haven't read any of your other fics, but this one really caught my eye. Your spelling and grammar are a bit off, nothing a good beta reader couldn't fix, and you tend to switch from present to past tense a lot. Once again, nothing a good beta reader couldn't fix. Oh, and just think of this as constructive criticism. I'm very big on spelling and grammar.
As far as how you got Kagome and Sesshoumaru together, very interesting concept. I don't think I've ever read a fic where they are transported somewhere else where no one can get to them.
Please, keep up the good work and update soon.
Ja - Hell's Angel

this fic doesnt tie in with ur others right? b/c in ur others inu and kag are together. i dont think kagome and sess could have sex, then still have kag end up with inu. this fic is going to be a kag/sess right? and what about inuyasha, will u explain what happaned to him?