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for Kagome! Where are you!

by jeffshelton

person CM
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
lol, your story just keeps getting better. I love how you keep slowly pulling Kag and Sess together. It's adorable! Update soon!
person Striking Falcon
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh goody, my first AFF review! I'm so excited! Um, anyway, I just wanted to say that I don't think you're going to fast at all. The worlds they're exploring are interesting and you should go slow. You're right about it not making sense for them to immediately sleep together. I bet you'd get complaints about that if you did. You just can't make some people happy! Oh well. Anyway, could you please let me know if you have an email schedule or something? And I'd love to recommend this story to a couple of my friends, but only if you say it's ok.

Your Loyal Guardian,

Striking Falcon
person MOFAF
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
thoroughly love the story...can wait for the lemons...know that they will be worth the wait...you are doing a wonderful job with the story
person snowcat
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HA, HA...button in fossilized dino-do! Oh and I suppose the dinosaurs went exstint due to a Pangea sized forest fire instead of an asteroid or meteoroid. "OOPS", said the raptors in unison. Fast updating for a great story!
person Zal
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, to be a fan of a different sort. Thanks for taking your time with the characters. It just wouldn't be believable if they hopped together in the sleeping bag that first night. I like it much better that you're slowly developing a relationship between them. Because of that, this is a great story!
person Naheta
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
jeffs you have done it yet again lol, you have hooked me with your mix of fact and fantisy, i will be looking for the next chappy.


Naheta Doe
person emerald dragon hanyou
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hmm. i just noticed something. i read your story on fanfiction.net, and btw, this is a GREAT story, i went 2 mediaminer, there 2, and now i came here, and its here. interesting. i'll have 2 remember 2 come back here again when it cotimetime 2 the lemon scene. cause fanfiction.net dont allow lemons, or even limes, *sigh* im such a pervert. i know! blame it on the monk! the hentai no baka! (stupid pervert) *sigh* i guess i have 2 go now. c u l8r, whether it b on 1 of the other sightes or not! ja ne.

~*~* EMERALD-
person Shadow Wolf
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O_O
Uh-oh. *points* Raptor with a lighter!! ahhh!! *chases after the raptor* You bring that back right now mister!!!
person JOler
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
love the story...can hardly wait for more...

intellegent dinos that is gonna be a stressful one for Kagome. wonder how long before Ses and Kag have a lemon occur...they are certainly doing enough dancing around it...lol

am sure the lemon is going to be well worth the wait...your lemons always. Mo.
person Zalphinian
schedule December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say thank you for taking your time with this story. It's so much more believable this way. I also appreaciate the research you put into your stories, it makes them that much more interesting to read.