rate_review Reviews

Yet another great chapter. Really interested me on how they womewhat cleansed a woman back then. No offense or anything, but I thought you were a girl ^^() But it's even more interesting when it's written by a guy. And I see no probs in someone that is hentai. Anyhow, hope to see the next chapter soon. I wonder what else Sesshy-kun plans to do next...Please continue Jeffy-sama! *she clasps her hands together, giving off her puppy dog eyes*

*Clapping*
Impressive.
Usually I am not this attentive to a story but I applaud you for capturing my interest long enough to make me reveiw so often.
*Drools*
Sesshoumaru in a loin cloth!!!!
I can't believe it!!!!
*Grins*
Bring on the mostly naked gorgeous demon!!!!
I am sooo jealous of Kagome!

OMG, poor Kagome! Has to marry a short old man. *cracks up* Sesshoumaru is just loving this I bet. Anyway, love the story and I really appreciate your vast knowledge of Japanese history. The chapter was a little short, but still good. So did Kagome really get it burned off? (I'm hentai too and also sadistically curious >;)~ )


~V~

Sorry I have not R&R in awhile.
You have come up with some of the most original ideas!

My wild guess: is Jaa Kalpa from a dilect of India?
The pace Sess and Kag are going at is just fine.

I was wondering if I could get you to reconcider doing a chap on AnnMac's Pern. Even if I have to go to her site to read it.
She dosn't totaly prohibit fanfic check out the fanfic forum at http://www.annemccaffrey.org/ scroll to the bottom of the pg.

Can't wait for S'more!

OMG that totally sux, cuz I would love to read a Pern Fanfic, the dragon in my name? it is because I feel so in love with the dragonrider series, and the first time I tried to use dragonrider, it was already taken, hence dragonfly instead. I have more than a shelf of my bookcase dedicated to only her books. Ah well. I really loved this chapter, especially since it was the first thing I got to see on my 17 inch moniter! I had a 13, BIG BIG difference. ok, anyway, I got sidetracked, as I often do. I really loved the convo between the two of them in this chapter, and especially when he offered her an out, and she was talking about not hurting him worse, with another betrayal, it was so poigniant. I love the emotion you put into it. Until the next update, Ja!

don't think particularly highly of Kagome (she seems a bit slutty to me anyway)...but Ses definitely has honor and chivalry (so what if he's a demon...he was brought up as royalty with certain standards). That out of the way...I think you are moving the story along at the proper rate...will email you a suggestion...

This is an awesome story. I lthe the way that you are slowly progressing towards a realationship with Kagome and Sesshomaru.
I can't wait until they finally do.

cool fic. i like what you are going for, specially for this pairing. what you did there seems a 'realistic'/possible way for all of it to actually happen. There were no unnecessary scenes, and that made it sometimes tiring. I guess i'm saying that 'unnecessary scenes' are necessary, but that sometimes is good just for a little 'break' from the intense plot. You asked how kagome and sesshomaru's relationship was going... I'd say is fast enough and slow enough, for if it were a bit slower it would get boring, and if it were faster it would be 'unrealistic'. I hope to read another chapter soon.. and sorry if my review is not clear. its been awhiinceince i've fics and/or reviewed...

Heya there again! ^^ Caught the new chapter. *she smiles as she reads over it again* I quite enjoyed it, like the rest of the chapters. Very into thought and loving too. Gotta go, so continue.

love it! love it!!! update soon!!!