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for Kagome! Where are you!

by jeffshelton

person dragonflyelj
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You just keep doing it Jeff! I must read the next chapter! I want to read it NOW!!! but I must be a good little reader, and be patient, luckily, you are a nice author and update 3x a week, Domo arigato gozimas!!! That preview just teased me SO bad! I gotta know what Sess is doing with those werewolves! Can't wait til Sunday.
person megh
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea how much I am enjoying this story. Keep going, please! :P
person dragonflyelj
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter, I wanna see Kagome's perspective! I want to see her be a badass like i know she can! I loved the latest chapter! It is cool to see Sauron before he became just the eye. update soon! Huggles,
Your friend n fan,
dragonflyelj
person Rin
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You'll write more soon, right?
person Angel Lymisty
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dear Jeffy-kun,
Heya again!. *she looks over the story as could only help but smile* Lord of the Rings...that's a damn good addition, and who knows Kagome may meet a certain famous elven! *she lowers her head snickering a bit* Kagome and Legolas...that would be an interesting happening. Bet lots of fan girls of Legolas will be SO jealous of her then! Also her comes Sesshoumaru becoming all jealous over another white haired cutie pie getting the attention of Kagome =P Too bad that won't happen, but I couldn't help but think about Legolas then Lady Kagome together. *she looks off to the side whispering to herself* For the moment being. *she loup, up, clasping her hands together letting a sigh escape her lips* That would be just amazing...Legolas falling for Kagome...Kagome finding a bit more interest the longer she knows Legolas. I mean who wouldn't? -^^-()...And no doubt Sesshoumaru-sama will surely not approve of their courting together. Anyhow, enough about my fantasies of you later chapters but...KAGOME HERE'S YOUR CHANCE TO BE WITH LEGOLAS!! *she feels a sudden chill up her spine as she stops cheerior tor the elven and miko. Hearing a sudden growling, she lowers her head feg sog someone glaring at her from behind. A sweatdrop() forming at the side as she smiles nervously* I mean...SESSHOUMARU AND KAGOME! CHEERS! ^^() Anyhow I would be SO gratified if you have your next chapters done soon! *she sniffles as her thoughts about Legolas and Kagome being together just fly off with their lives with a certain taiyoukai chasing the idea away* And it was a good idea too...*she grabs a tissue, dabbing the sides of her face as she waves weakingly to her thought* Good bye dearest fantasy, I wouldn't doubt that Kagome would of fallen for Legolas or the other way around. *she jumps immediatly when she heard another sudden growl, but much more deadly* Well, gotta go now Jeffy-kun! ^^() I got to run for my life on this account. *she dashes off waving as Sesshoumaru chases after her with poisonous claws* LOVE YA JEFFY-KUN!!

Lots and lots of love,
Angel Lymisty
person akumu
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh gods in christ, cue the dramatic music! this ones going to give me an ulcer with the suspence and such...update soon/rar/war/whatever so i dont get too gapinga hoa hole in my inards! lol. tasty as of yet...
person snowcat
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Exceptional intermission chapter! Lots to think over - like; How well did you keep yourself from chuckling while writing the "panties" paragraphs!coulcouldn't keep a straight face, even when I felt sad for Inu Yasha! And why wasn't Jaken (Cuz Rin is too young to understand) question the group that their plan only focused on Kagome and not Sesshoumaru? Where will that leave Sessh if Kagome gets returned by the shards? Why didn't Jaken leave with Inu & co.? Wouldn't Jaken be of some power against Naraku, he hasn't always had to babysit Rin("Swords of Destiny"-DVD). You don't need to answer I'm just babbling for review sake! ^_^
person psr
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, new chapters. That was a great synopses of the Silmarillion. I can't wait to see where you go with the story. It would be great to see Sess kick Sauron's sorry ass.
person Rin
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Will you write more soon? Please?
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update update update, awesome story, i speoursours reading it while writing my own fanfic. Awesome story! ;) keep up the good work.