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February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, nice chapter. Update soon, please. pwease. update update update. Ooh, fluffy-sama loves kagome, as she him, yelp. UGLY TROLL, UGLY UGLY DIE DIE DIE.
Spiders are very evil. ewwwwwwwwww
Spiders are very evil. ewwwwwwwwww
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February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* I agree that old JRR couldn't write a romance to save his ass, partly because he had no insight whatsoever into women. I find many things about you and himself similar. Of course the temtation is to print your Homage to Tolkien section out of this fic and mail it to Christopher. What would he make of it?
So far as Inuyasha goes if you hate the guy that much why not put him up for being tortured to death alockwockworkknights little stories. Essentiially you left the poor guy having totally debased himself with dirty, squishy pants, revealed in front of all his companions.
As for Kagome? This is a major sticking point! Honestly sir, you also have also have little insight into the workings of a female mind. She would never act like that as the moral person that you present her to be. You speak of her as a moral person and yet you give her the character of a cold-hearted slut. It is one or the other. CHOOSE ONE AND STICK TO IT! Women in their hearts don't really vacillate so much.
Sesshoumaru would simply flay you. 'Nuff said.
~A critic
P.S. Stop puffing off your damned education, or lack there of! Nobody likes a pendant!
So far as Inuyasha goes if you hate the guy that much why not put him up for being tortured to death alockwockworkknights little stories. Essentiially you left the poor guy having totally debased himself with dirty, squishy pants, revealed in front of all his companions.
As for Kagome? This is a major sticking point! Honestly sir, you also have also have little insight into the workings of a female mind. She would never act like that as the moral person that you present her to be. You speak of her as a moral person and yet you give her the character of a cold-hearted slut. It is one or the other. CHOOSE ONE AND STICK TO IT! Women in their hearts don't really vacillate so much.
Sesshoumaru would simply flay you. 'Nuff said.
~A critic
P.S. Stop puffing off your damned education, or lack there of! Nobody likes a pendant!
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February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nakie Sessy? O.O
This chapter was awesome! I love how powerful Kagome is! She is actually more powerful than Sess in this chapter, with him being locked int that room and all. Now my question is - A fully healed and restored Kagome, a fully healed and restored Sesshoumaru... which is more powerful on Middle Earth? It would be interesting to see something happen where they were somehow turned against one another and went head to head in a battle. I agree with you about Tolkien and not enough romance, although I have only read the three main books plus the Hobbit, I did have that same feeling from reading.
This chapter was awesome! I love how powerful Kagome is! She is actually more powerful than Sess in this chapter, with him being locked int that room and all. Now my question is - A fully healed and restored Kagome, a fully healed and restored Sesshoumaru... which is more powerful on Middle Earth? It would be interesting to see something happen where they were somehow turned against one another and went head to head in a battle. I agree with you about Tolkien and not enough romance, although I have only read the three main books plus the Hobbit, I did have that same feeling from reading.
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February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Grins* OMG I LOVED IT!!!
NOOOOOOOOO!!!! Why did you stop there?!?!?!
NOOOOOOOOO!!!! Why did you stop there?!?!?!
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February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dear Jeffy-kun,
Heya there jeffy-kun! ^^ Well I was thinking about what you sent me in that e-mail. The idea with Kagome and Eleron, sorry can't spell, well it sounds good to my opinion. Though it would of been more interesting if it were the one and only Legolas, but then again not me fanficcy =P But that certain elvan she helps out of that prison, that was what really caught my attention in the twenty-seventh chapter. If he has white hair as well, if would be some competition if that certain elvan falls for Kagome. For Sesshoumaru...hmm...not sure but him being adorn by other women is off the balance for the moment, but Kagome needs to have her points of jealousy for Sesshoumaru too. But Sesshoumaru and Kagome should stay together nonetheless. But competition always make the story more interesting at a high level. Not quite sure how far this story will be going, but I hope it'll be a while. *she smiles* I just Love it too much. Well, gotta go. LOVE YA JEFFY-KUN! ^^ *Dashes, GONE*
Lots and lots of love,
Angel Lymisty
Heya there jeffy-kun! ^^ Well I was thinking about what you sent me in that e-mail. The idea with Kagome and Eleron, sorry can't spell, well it sounds good to my opinion. Though it would of been more interesting if it were the one and only Legolas, but then again not me fanficcy =P But that certain elvan she helps out of that prison, that was what really caught my attention in the twenty-seventh chapter. If he has white hair as well, if would be some competition if that certain elvan falls for Kagome. For Sesshoumaru...hmm...not sure but him being adorn by other women is off the balance for the moment, but Kagome needs to have her points of jealousy for Sesshoumaru too. But Sesshoumaru and Kagome should stay together nonetheless. But competition always make the story more interesting at a high level. Not quite sure how far this story will be going, but I hope it'll be a while. *she smiles* I just Love it too much. Well, gotta go. LOVE YA JEFFY-KUN! ^^ *Dashes, GONE*
Lots and lots of love,
Angel Lymisty
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February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The story line is excellent. But, as in the past reviews, you desperatly need an editor that can clean it up.
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February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I am so upset that I haven't kept up with your story!!! (Internet problems)
I have to say I LOVED the chapters!!! ^.^ Update soon!!!
I have to say I LOVED the chapters!!! ^.^ Update soon!!!
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February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I've been reading your story for a while now, and it's about time I told you how much I enjoy it. You do a great job keeping the plot light and entertaining.
When you included all the Silmarillion stuff, the fangirl in me grinned like mad. Thus the Tolkien geeks are lured from their dark nerdly shadows. Ugh... I've been programming for hours and English no lo mak makes sense. I can't be held accountable for any errors or insanity in this review. Anywho, nice characterizations, dev development, and really creative work.
Thanks, and keep it up
When you included all the Silmarillion stuff, the fangirl in me grinned like mad. Thus the Tolkien geeks are lured from their dark nerdly shadows. Ugh... I've been programming for hours and English no lo mak makes sense. I can't be held accountable for any errors or insanity in this review. Anywho, nice characterizations, dev development, and really creative work.
Thanks, and keep it up
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February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love your story a lot pls pls update sooooooon
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February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow...i really like this story...it is really really good!!
BUT i do desperately want some kad/sesh action to go on! when is that gonna happen?
cant wait for the next chapter!!!
have fun writing it!!
BYE
BUT i do desperately want some kad/sesh action to go on! when is that gonna happen?
cant wait for the next chapter!!!
have fun writing it!!
BYE