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for Kagome! Where are you!

by jeffshelton

person Naheta
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i have to say this story has me in a trance lol i see a up date and bam i find the page open and i am reading it. lol nice job jeff


Naheta
person Keiko Yuki
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fanfic is soooooo awesom lov love you for creating this story! You are now officially one of my favorite authors. *If not my only favorite* I love the story line and I've never read anything like it. You are truly a good writer. I dunno if you already have someone to edit your work *not that your grammar and spelling is that bad, personally I've seen worse* but if you don't I am more than willing to edit it if you'd email it to me. If not then that's ok. *So long as you continue writing* I totally respect you for not having them jump into bed together right away. ^.^ Ja ne!

My email: animekayneko@msn.com
person kasey
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nonononononononononono! no fight between them! i will be sad and distraught pleaassssseeeee let there be peace!
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was the most evilest cliffy i have ever read.

Please write more soon, I love this
person megami
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have a request/sugestion on where they should go next, send them to the world of Dragonball Z, or kenshins time that would be fun, hehe or even send them to nerima and see what happens. this is a great fic can't wait for the next chapter
person dragonflyelj
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter! Ok, so I think that Kagome should try to pacify him somehow... hmmm. There is no way in hell Sess, prideful lord of the western lands will allow someone to take what is his a second time, but shy bey be able to reason with him... nah, he is too damn hard headed. ok, so Sess will allow for the god to examine his swords, only if they are still in his possesion. maybe that would work, a compromise of sorts. Or Sess could just tell them to go to hell, they are no gods of his, hehe. Well, I can't wait to see what your mind comes up with!
person blackshadowfox
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
have kagome help sessru kru kill the gods... dumb mother fuckers..
person psr
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I really like your spin on Tolkien's works. I completely agree with your views of the romance issue in his works, but it doen't stop me from loving his stories. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person blacka
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!
Your story is so cool! I absolutely love it! man... I'm all hiper right now... I want to know what happens next!
The relations, plot, narration, everything is excellent.
person Kitsune Firerose
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading your fic for a while now but I figured I when I started reading would wait a while before reviewiWellWell its been
a while so here I am reviewing you have an interesting writting style and I have read a couple of your fics and I like them and I
like this the most.

You said something about how you were interested in putting vampires in to see how Tenseiga would work on them so maybe you
could go with Hellsing (And if you don't know what Hellsing is its an anime/ manga ^_^ about a vampire or vampires one named
Alucard "Dracula" and then there's Ceres Victoria Flegeling he made at the beginning of the series)