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Wow! another wonderfull chapter, full of subtle details and giving a such a realistic insight on the characters!

I laughed ad Sesshoumaru twitching at Kagome's description of Melkor as a self centered bully, that was so fitting also for him...

I wonder how much Sess's curse on Sauron has to do with his loss in the next great battle and later on the destruction of the one ring... He did get seriously bad luck after all. That was a very nice touch!

Just a little nitpick... Im confused as to why Kagome was envious of Sesshoumaru's clothes repairing themselves and wanting to know that trick? I had thought he already did that, as her school uniform were repairing itself until it died waking her in Sauron's tower. So why didin't she awaken the spirit in those new clothes also?

Anyway, please keep up such wonderful work. I'm particularly eager to read the next chapter. Each time you made them talk was sooo instructive. Your view of their personnality is really captivating and so... I don't know... fitting? realistic? in tune with everything happening in the original work?

And please find a little time from time to times for "A Shard in Kyoto" too. Such disturbingly realistic work, where our characters aren't almighty and have to compose with delicate situations are so rare!

Thank you for giving us such enticing stories!

hey great job. i love the LOTR arc. i read most of tolkiens stuff and i liked how u interpreted it into the story. Update soon ;)

*WHEW* fighting the good , the bad (and the ugly? Balrog?)!!! Having Kagome explain that she had a destiny to fight evil was good, but not too unexpected, but I really liked how you had her cleverly twist the situation so that Eonwe had to chose the lesser destruction of his two combat choices. Anxious just thinking about what Sessh will think up for Kagome's promise to him?...*meowpurr* Very relieved nothing awful happened to Sessh's "fluffy"! id Sid Sessh get his tiayoukai clothing retrived and Kagome didn't get her uniform? Thanks sooo much for such a great story! Will be anticipating S & K "together alone time".

I admit, I was a little worried...I didn't think you would pull this chapter off without having to hack up a bunch of elves, but you did it! Bravo! I can't wait to hear the discussion about Inu Yasha.

awesome as usual! u are the best writer! when im ing ing your story i feel like i am really there an seeing whats going on!!! good job!!!

WOW, nicey chappy

I love it so far. Kagome can't attack him. It will do more harm than good same for here attacking the other side. I think she needs to tell them that they are trying to find their way home. And while these weapons and their stuff may cause more harm than good here it is needed on their quest and when they eventually fight Naraku. I think she needs to mentions something about Naraku and their battles so as to win their trust more because of thier common goals. Maybe she should just kiss Sess to shut him up and stop him and then after the kiss explain their circumstances to the elves. At least that is my opinion. I still love the story keep up the good work. You put so much work and effort and research in your stories that it makes it one of best that I have read.

ok whatever you what to do is ok by me but please dont let kagome atack
sesshomaru they have gone true a lot i know but still is she atacks him and somehow
make it out so they could be frinds again the trust they one had would never be the same...
so please make it in some other way just don't put them to fiht under does circuntances...
also even is kagome trust this guy she just recently met she knows sesshomaru longer...
well any way is your fic so do as you like...but just keep what i just said in my if you what...
well another great chapter you have there...and keep this story as interesting at it is ok....
UPDATE SOON OK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I just wanted to say that i love this story and keep up with it with a passion i did not know i had in me! The way that the characters grow and develope over time and through the different worlds that they encounter is a wonderful way to let us get to know them and their growing relationship! Also, Bravo! in picking the stories that you have used to intertwine with the Inuyasha Universe! I am especially fond of Tolkiens work and am glad that you did not use the trilogy. The time period you choose was perfect for the story as it is going...As for guessing what will get them out of the mess they have landed in...well, they have their possesions...they have two obvious options...fight their way out...or relent and hope for the best...the idea i would have in mind would be to do neither. they already have their things (which includes the very item they would need to get out of there to begin with) so...they could just leave! Kag and Sess activate the cube and POOF! no more arrogant elves....solution simplified, no blood shed! both Kagome and Sesshoumaru should be able to live with that without causing a rift in their struggling relationship. I wonder if that is something like what you have in mind...anyway, I'll be waiting for the next updat
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poor kagome and sesshy...wonder if they could make a deal to just leave? lol, they might listen to her, she is the daughter of a goddess...