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December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've read this on another site. I think it was a single spark. I am so glad this has so many more chapters that one. Although the story is great, I think you should go over it because you have alot of spelling mistakes.
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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is the worst story I've ever read. Ever. Horrible premise, ridiculous plot, terrible grammar and spelling and punctuation and formatting. The characterization, too, is the pits. Your revolting and slanderous version of Sesshoumaru makes me weep bitter tears of sorrow. The sex scenes are tragically, horrifically bad, using prose I never even dreamt could be so stilted and ridiculous. Surely there's a reward out there, somewhere, for managing to create such an enormous steaming pile of shite.
The badness of this fic goes beyond bad to funny, and beyond funny to bad again. Points for consistency, though. It was terrible all the way through-- no shining moments that made me think, "well, there's talent there, if only he can find a way to access it." That you managed to write 66 chapters of it, and yet have it suck just as badly at the end as it did at the beginning (in other words, that after all that practice, you still didn't get any closer to mastering the art of writing) amazes me on a level usually reserved for things witnessed in Ripley's Believe It Or Not, or the book of world records. I feel like I've been through a train wreck. I need my mommy.
The badness of this fic goes beyond bad to funny, and beyond funny to bad again. Points for consistency, though. It was terrible all the way through-- no shining moments that made me think, "well, there's talent there, if only he can find a way to access it." That you managed to write 66 chapters of it, and yet have it suck just as badly at the end as it did at the beginning (in other words, that after all that practice, you still didn't get any closer to mastering the art of writing) amazes me on a level usually reserved for things witnessed in Ripley's Believe It Or Not, or the book of world records. I feel like I've been through a train wreck. I need my mommy.
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June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kagome where are you is one of the best sess/kag fanfictions iv ever read please email me when you update again please i cant wait till you update.
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay I really don't like the sesshoumaru and kagome pairing but you are a good writter that even I am having a hard time disliking it. I still feel like she should be somewhat put in her place. I mean come on she gets everything. NO WAY? right???Poor Inuyasha. Maybe kagome should realize that she feed inuyasha too. That is maybe why he loves her. Other then that I regret to say I like it.
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June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a great story. i can't wait to read Kagome's Return! XD
With Much Love
Huggles
~Liz~
Jan! ^_^
With Much Love
Huggles
~Liz~
Jan! ^_^
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June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YEOWZA!....They made it! Whew! Three chapters to catchup to after returning from my vacation, and finding the story ended too, while I was away. I think a "Sessh in the City" (yes, play on words intended, lol) could make for some funny side story chapter about Sessh exposed to technology and modern living. Thanks jeffs that was a great roller coaster adventure! Antisipating "Kagome's Return"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwww im so sad its over but i cant wait for the sequal i need to know what happens and i will look forward to when uyou fill in the chapters you talked about but didnt do yet Yea im so excited your story is great and i enjoyed reading it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow america lets see what happens
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June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for kagome returns!!!. it's been a pleasure reading your work!!. love it love it love it !!!=)
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June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey jeffs i love ya for makin this story so long so try to post the sequel asap please