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for Kagome! Where are you!

by jeffshelton

person sa
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww that was soo cute of Sesshoumaru to tell Kagome how he loved her. I hope she can return his feelings back to him. Update soon!
person Tomoe
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaiii... That was simply perfect! Such sweet romantic moments... but to stop right after his confession was harsh, now I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
person Jade
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I understand building the relationship but let them have sex enjoy eachother. Inuyasha might love her but remember he loves Kikyou more so it's a perfect reason for inuyasha to leave kagome even though he loves her. and kagome needs to give up on inu let sesshoumaru be happy for once me saying that he's never and only has rin and that stupid toad jaken.
person Levii
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! This is one of the best Sess/Kag fics i've ever read! i love that ending scene too... *sigh* so romantic... (hopeless romantic here)... I can't wait to read your next chapter! Update soon! ^_^
person unokitsune
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
damn you, just when it was beggining to get SAPPY!!!! you have to go and END IT!!!!!!!!! grrrrrrr *curses you*
Oh well, update soon yah hear?!? because if you don't, you'll have a very mad fox on your heels until ye do.
person Kasey
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! that was beautiful!!!! GOOD JOB!!!
person Laydhwk
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are an exceptionally fascinatining, and intriguing writer. I find your attention to detail to be pleasantly overwhelming. I am enjoying, and look forward to, reading your story very much. - At this time I also thank you for your regular and consistant updates, also for the length of your chapters, again I say, you are exceptional. As for your concern over the 'dialogue' between Kagome and Sesshomaru in your last chapter - I personally would have expected nothing less than this type of closeness/openness between them. It is, ater all, a known and documented FACT that intense situations can and do cause people to act outside of their normal personalities or behavoir, - Kind of a 'Truth' under 'Pressue', if you will. And with all that these two charactors have been through in such a relativlely short span of time, has without a doubt brought them closer simply by circumstance. I look forward to more from you. May I be so bold as to ask your age?
Thank you for you time.
person leishkychan
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey great work!!! I LOVE IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hey UPDATE soon please me wanna know!!!! more!!!
ok calm down leishkychan -_- anyway just do your thing
for the next chapter to be great like or the other ok!!!!
TAKECARE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person jackie
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I'm really enjoying your story! Please keep up the that great imagination of yours! Can't wait for the next chappie!!!!
person Shiro Ryu
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As usual you deliver a fantastic chapter! Please do not wait too long to update! I am dieing to read Kagome and Sesshoumaru's discussion.