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WHOA!!! AWESOME!! YOU have touch based with all the points I've been trying to make in my stories. Darn you! You got to them first! HA HA, but honestly, you did it really well. Hell, better then I would have assumed. Great job.
Can't for from the lemony freshness. It's about time! Jk.
p.s I love that dog demon legend! It explains sooooo much.

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i loved the up dates Jeff and i like the twist you have going

Naheta

Another awesome chappie!!! Can't wait for more. I'm really looking forwto tto the next installment. I hope it has lots-o-action. peace!


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your story is great!! I can't wait for more chappies!! oh and you are DEFINATELY NOT going to slow. Its PERFECT. can't wait for more chappies, i'll be checking! laterz!! };->~

You big TEASE!!!! hehe. No, you are not going to fast, just post that damn lemon already would ya? (hehe, sorry, I just have to harass you a little, I wouldn't be me otherwise!) As I have told you from the start of this story, I love the way you write it, and I feel that the tempo that you have set for their relationship is just right, I personally lose interest in a story where they have sex in the first chapter, and then they are all lovey dovey for the rest of the story. ok, well, I will be watching on baited breath for that next update, hehe, yes, I am a bit of a hentai too! LMAO

I think that you are going just fine with their relationship. Kagome is a young human, and at this time in her life, the urge to mate and procreate are rather strong. On top of that, she has been forced into a very stressful situation. However, I believe that her feelings for Sessomaru are real and not the result of her stress. I also like how you hae them bouncing back and forth through space and dimension and they do not loose their personalities.
But the most enjoyable thing I find about this story is the fact that it is a plot-driven story. Most stories are just sub-text to the people getting it on. Your story makes what is happening believable. I can't wait for the two of them to finally get back home. When they do, will Kagome try to get Sessomaru thru the bone-eater's well so he can experience her world.
One thing, have you thought of having the wanderers pop up in the DBZ universe. It would be interesting to see what they would do if they came across people who could destroy them without breaking a sweat. It might also be cool if they pick up a few tricks there to help them on their journey.
The other place I would like to see them show up in is in the world of either Robert Jordan (Wheel of Time) or David Eddings (Belgariad/Mallorean or Elenian/Tamuli). If you plan on using these worlds, that would be great. If not, oh well, I can dream.
Keep up the stupendus work.

about your final question... HEll no!!! keep it up! your story only gets better and better!

In no way are you going to fast! I'd say you are going at just the right pace (even if it sometimes feels a little like a tease). Please continue as you see fit. Oh, and UPDATE SOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I like it. You didn't upset me in the least. To be honest your stories are tame compared to others that I have read. They also don't have the same kind of historical feel to them as yours do. Keep up the good work.

Thats so cool, I didn't know you wrote other stories that linked to this one. I'll be sure to read them, behind my parents back! (Turn on James Bond music)