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For lack of something more eloquent.......mmmmmm, very nice.

This is getting reeaaaaaaaaaaaaaallllllllllllyyyyyyyyyy goooooooood.The stuff you wrote is making me wanna say GOD WHY THE HELL WONT SHE HURRY UP AND GET TO THE GOOD STUFF. I mean really now your teasin us.


It's just wrong.

Give us a break.

WE DON'T DESERVE THIS!

Thank you for your time and keep up the amazing work.
Lata.AR AAAARRRRRRRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. RedWolf.

I forgot I wanted to send a howl out to my boo Sesshoumaru. You go boo do yo thang. Lovin Ya from the bottom of my heart. Canines 4 eva. AR ARRRRRROOOOOOO. Love your graetest numba one fan Red Wolf.

One more thing from your girl Red Wolf aight. I'd like to send a "howl out" to my boo Sesshoumaru. I Love You Sesshy! Keep it real sight and you do yo thang. I'll be waitin for ya on the flipside. All my love to ya Sesshy.

From Yo Girl,
Red Wolf

AR ARRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

WOW!!! I will certainly say this Jeff, you make it worth the wait, ne? *wipes sweat from brow* I should have waited until AFTER work to read that. oh man! hehe. Oh god speaking of work, I gotta go! I loved the chapter, chat with yousoon!

I love your fic's! Your attention to detail is excellent and you very obviously do a lot of research to keep your facts acurate.
Although i love reading fan fic and i have been following this one and your other the (Fertility festival) i am a lazy person and haven't left any reviews...my bad i know.

I like how the relationship between the main charactors isn't rushed, like most fics. The development of your charactors is steady and building, and not slopy there are no sudden changes in there personalities and i as a reader appricate the steady flow of the story and wait very, very impaitently for the next chapters.

Keep up the good....no excellent work!

P.S.

in earlier chapters you mentioneat yat you were open to "new world suggestions" i have recently downloaded vol 4-27 of a manga called "Beserk" and after reading it, immediatly thought it would be a perfect world for Sesshomaru aagomagome to spend a few days or if something should happen to the cube a few weeks on. If you have seen the anime let me tell you the Manga is very diffrent. Iu aru are intrested in getting it from me to take a look at and have ICQ or WinMx let me know..or if you have Bittorent i could send you the link where i downloaded the files. Any way its just a suggestion.

I look forward to your next chapters...Please hurry! :)

Nightscream

OK Jeff.....If only it were true about the food thing..hehehe...I found out that men only love U why'll they R eating the food LOL. The hanky Panky is just desert....sniff..sniff..!!

{::grabs hold of J's pant leg::} Forgive me Jeff-sama! I'm so sorry! I've been so busy lately, I haven't had time for a decent meal, no less reviewing one of my fav authors! But I had a free moment (at 1:05 in the morning) to read the past 6 (?) chapters! I've missed a lot! But everything still flows! I personally don't understand why anyone would have been offended by chapter 31, but it was really nice of you to offer up the apology early. Once again, my apologies for being away for so long! I'll try really hard not to let it happen again. If it'll make you feel better, you can imagine me with ice cream on my head. That's kinda how I've been for the past month. Work is hell, what can I say?

I really like your story I love the paring to. I hope you udate soon. Good luck with reviews, hope you get a lot.

*squeals with joy* More "time alone" to come! As to answer your question, I'm adequately enjoying the pace of their intimacy. However, by Kagome thinking [...How can I hurt him?....Can I deny him that?...I can let him be happy. I c I couldn't help but feel sad, that after all that Sessh spilled, he was allowed to help her bathe out of pity, that's how it came across to me. They both are inexpncednced when it comes to determining what a healthy love relationship is. At least Sessh has experience in knowing what he doesn't want, and you do have kagome able to explain her expections of freedom in a relationship. Well, you did have Sessh say he "liked" being challenged by Kagome, we'll have to see how you get her to truly desire to bring happiness to Sessh, and not out of pity or duty to her promise. On a completely erenerent note,(although it was an exellent touch to the story) I was a bit confused in the one pharagraph that talked about "half dog demons are affected... mother's milk qualified" ? Are you saying they are loyal to their mother because they were their first feeding, if so, theat oat of Sessh and his mother?