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wow that was good... cept i think yur putting too many worlds in... i thin k maybe they should be getting back to inuyasha soon, cuz that's when the real action will start.. well you should update ASAP! please?

Hi there
i realy like your story , pretty good with the alternate universes, don't worry about your spelling mine is worse. Anyways i was wondering if you were going to do a chapter on Salem? think about it the Miko and the demon in Salem could be quite a witch hunt or have you ever read a Terry Goodkind book sesshomorou againt Darken Rahl or Emperoggenggen would be cool they are pretty cruel caracters. Anyway who am i to tell you what to write, my point was to tell you i liked your stuff and keep it up and i'll keep reading.

I enjoy your story, it's well written ,and you go into detail with thoughts and actions. I have an idea, though, you may not like it, but I think that Kagome and Sesshomaru should be sent back to Middle Earth. this time, in Frodo's time where they can see jsut how much everything's changed. Maybe face Sauron's anger again, but at least learn about the other people's of Middle earth, like the hobbits, for instance. It's just an idea, however, any route you take with the story will work very well. Your perspective that was given to Kagome and Sesshomaru was very unique, and keeps me guessing, at least on what's going to happen next, and what new world they are going to. I have one question, though, are Kagome and Sesshomaru ever going to get back home, or are they going to make a home somewhere else?

A response would be nice if you have the time.

- Serene -

You are so evil! Just kidding. Can't wait for the next chapter.

as long as the FINAL pairing overall in your universe is inu/kag, im happy. Inu and sess cant share her forever, and kikyo and kagome cant share inuy for forever, soon they will have to choose. i wouldnt feel too bad about kag sleeping with sess, if u maybe did a scene with inuyasha and kikyo, during the time kag and sess are together. He is obviously going through alot of sexual frustration, (the wet dream, the jerking off scene with kagome's panties) and it would be plausible for him to go to kikyo, his first love, for relief. In When Friends Find Out, it seems as though kagome finally chooses inuyasha over sesshoumaru. (When sesshoumaru comes for her, she kicks him in the nuts, and she states that she will ask inuyasha to marry her if he doesnt ask her after naraku is dead) and i like that. I, personally, think inuyasha should activate that Boon of strength he was given in Spring Fertility Festival, and kill sesshoumaru. but thats me!

hey that was a very intresting chapter, cant wait for the update man

Don't you just wish girls were that easy. :P

Hey Jade here and i was jus reading all the chapters and well... their asowm. o and i'm not a good speller. anyways i was jus wondering was up wit inuyasha, Miroku[who is tolaly hot] shippo and Sango? r Sango and Miroku gonna have somthing going on? and jus type faster cuse i can't wait till u'r next chapter comes out!!! and did i meantion i'm u biggest fan!!! lol

JADE

Mmm, nice job with this chapter. Can't wait till the next. hmhmhm, update soon, ciao ;)

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