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for Kagome! Where are you!

by jeffshelton

person Heather
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
interesting story, your actualy good at writting unlike some stories iv'e read by other people. anywanywho , iv'e enjoyed your style of writting and hope you continue to write more.
give me a holla sometime
-heather ^_~
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How about if pure kagome kills the curse within her, but as a side affect, she gets to keep the vampires immortality. However, the vampire will die off and dissapear in some way. What do you think?
person Nicole
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think Kagome should break the curse and find another way 2 become immortal. By the way, great chap. :)
person Maria
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
KILL THE CURSE!! That is my opinion..
person holyDark
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was a great chapter, hmhmhm. Truth be told i think Kagome should break the vampire curse. Thats just my outlook though, so whatever. Great job. Ja
person Anna
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Even if she dies now, that would be better than letting an evil live within her. One wrong turn with Sessho could give the demon/evil time to destroy her, to lock her away. And she surely wouldn't be able to use her pow powers while part evil... well, I guess Kikyo does. But still, I would rather have her die than retain the evil.
That's just my two cents, but I will say this is the only story on this site that I hunt for--hoping for updates.
person wyldwolfrose
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Coolies!!!! I am sooo, into this!!! You're story is really great and you put out another great chappie!!! update soon!!!
person kaa
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Did I sense a little bit of Beavis and Butthead in the fire spirit? hehehehe!
person Pixie
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I believe that you should allow Kagome to die like a normal human, for Sesshomaru would never again look upon her the same way if Kagome were to let the Vampiric side take over her.
person Shiro Ryu
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good! I'm all for destroying the curse. Keeping it would seriously reek havoc with her purity (at least with the form of vampire you are using in this story). She would be better off becoming a japanese youkai, in their mythology they don't seem to be essentially evil. Besides, he rhe really wants to be immortal, I would think she could use the shikon no tama. Anyway, thank you for your recent update! I look forward to reading more!