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for Kagome! Where are you!

by jeffshelton

person dragonflyelj
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Jeff!
Haven't had a chance to read in awhile, so just caught up on 4 chapters, whew! a lot has happened! I am glad that not only was Tensaiga awakened but that Uzami will be watching over this Kagome. I have a feeling that were we to come back an look at this word a few years down the road, that Kagome would be quite a powerful entity, and vampires would be hiding in caves and dark basements to escape her. And the scene with Sess n Kagome was HOT! Can't wait to see what happens in the next world, Sess looks to be in poorpe.
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person vampyrosa
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was hella good!

~V~ Can't wait for the next installment. I hope Sessho is alright!
person MOFAF
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
a world without magic??? ... sure hope Ses is ok....too long there might just kill him

bet Kagome is worried sick. hope they don't get attacked.
person snowcat
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*chanting* SUSANO-O...SUSANO-O...SUS...That's mypicipicion. Take that Inuyasha(!), for acting so disrespectful toward him last spring. Will you have Sesshoumaru find out? will he be offended once he learns about what transpired between Susano-o and Inuyasha? As far as my underwear goes...thank goodness for "shields" and it's going to take more than a coath ath to get over this chapter. So there it is, take your compliment and run. Just take your time if you need to so your quality stays the same, K?
person Fluffy sama 13
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update soon! Thanks. Ja Ne
person Leishkychan
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM


I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm so looking foward to the next world!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So please update soon ok!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person akumu
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i will be brutally honest when i say, that vampire world was oddly hard for me to get into in the beginning. i have no idea why, because i love vampire stories usually. maybe it just wasnt my thing this time around. anywho, somewhere in the last 2 chapters(not positive where) i got into it. i do like the concept of the whole sharing thing, but that may be considered personal biase. i'm a biggy on I/K couplings(despite as much as i read S/K) and i love the way you've done Sesshoumaru in this story. he's had major character developement which is a nice change from many fan fics, and so, he's technically still not OOC(i hate those, if its gunna be really OOC, just throw in an OC to take there place in my mind). plus, an actually I/K/S pairing would be a nice touch of Irony in my mind, being as of the history of Inu's and Sesshy's parents that you used. i, am a lover of irony, it always just tickles me pink. anywho, i like where it's going as of yet as far as i can see. i shall now stop this painfully long review, lol.
person akuma_river
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well about the plan logically it could work. And if they explain it to detail to Inuyasha about it and how if it doesn't work he could lose Kagome instead of sharing her. It will probably most likely sort of work. Depending on the mood he is in and how the relationship with Sessoumaru and him is. I beleive that if it is Kagome bringing it up and explaining to Inuyasha, with his own triangle of her and Kikyo he may be more understanding of it. But I hope it works. If Kagome can get it over his thick about it he may consent to it. But only if both her and Sesshoumaru explain the full details of it and why they are trying to avoid what had happened to Inu and Sess's own parents.

Btw you aren't the first to pull the three between them. But I think yours will be more realistic. Btw keep up the excellent work I love your stories.
person blackshadowfox
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well another awesome chapter jeff, what world they going to next??
person leishkychan
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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update soon please
i love this fiction please just let it be a graet chapter next time and please at least make her realize that sometimes
love is very near... but yet so far.... I think you will find out the meaning of it but if you don't then e-mail me and i tell you ok...