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for Kagome! Where are you!

by jeffshelton

person rice_baby
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are evil...EVIL! That was one heck of a cliffhanger...but, nevertheless, the chapter is full of excitement and accuracy...to a degree. Onegai, be nice to Sesshoumaru-sama or at least make the "foul fair" later. I reallyoyedoyed how to carefully integrated the different aspects of the different worlds into one story that really based on the simple little cube that causes all the troubles. Thank-you very much for updating regularly because if you didn't, loyal fans such as I would die a slow and painful death *lol*. Thanks again and update soon.
person heninu11
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love your story so far. and i have beendingding it from the beginning. Normally I would continue reading after the point you just wrote, but I luv the story soo much that I will continue reading and just skill over the parts I don't like,( which i have to say this would be the first time in any of your storyies.) I realize that this is my own oppion. I also think that you are one of the best fanfic writers here. I am kinda of hoping it doesn't go the way it is sounding but if it does it will make the story interesting. Please updated soon. You are an amazing auther, I wish I could do even half as good.
person heninu11
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love your story so far. and i have been reading it from the beginning. Normally I would continue reading after the point you just wrote, but I luv the story soo much that I will continue reading and just skill over the parts I don't like,( which i have to say this would be the first time in any of your storyies.) I realize thi this is my own oppion. I also think that you are one of the best fanfic writers here. I am kinda of hoping it doesn't go the way it is sounding but if it does it will make the story interesting. Please updated soon. You are an amazing auther, I wish I could do even half as good.
person MOFAF
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great chap...poor Ses wonder what Kag is going to do to get away...sounds interesting
person blackshadowfox
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dang man...i pray to god that kagome jumps down and kills those two guys. and i seriously hope that Sess doesnt get ass raped by a russian soilder... that would fucking suck... any way you heard my suggestions. later
person LovelyLioness57
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow... a history lesson AND a great fanfic! hehez... but they'd better get out of that world fast.. i don't like seeing sesshoumaru weak and defenseless.. he's supposed to be strong and vicious! not weak and mushy...

oh and one question- let's say that your part about inuyasha's mom and stuff actually happened.. and remember in the episodes where sesshoumaru brought in the un-mother diguised as inuyasha's mom? wouldn't that be totally heartless of him after inuyasha killing his own mom??? just mentioning..

update soon! ^^
person Tweeky Monkey
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I could have sworn that I had reviewed before this chapter. Oh, well. I just wanted to add that I have been religiously reading this from the very beginning.
person sphinx
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this more and more. Very creative. Thank you for this gift.
person Tweekymonkey
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love how much you think out the worlds of the stories even if you don't put those descrpitions in the storie itself. It's a lot like what Tolkien did with Middle Earth. And on the flowery language thing, thats one of thething that sets you apart from a lot of the other Fan Fic writers. I don't think your story needs too much flowery stuff.
Stephen King once said that the sign of an amature writer is too many adjectives. So, keep up the good work.
person Jade
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
write faster damit lol jk jk jk so like was gonna happen i wanna know he he okies well im me at
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HoneyCakes3296
LOL okies well im me please and remember to type irealreally good chapter but waite......u already have good chapters on so i guess u can jus keep writing them bye