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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ur story is off the hook man. I love it. A lot of my story could be a second part of ur story. U are useing movies u seen and i think its kool. I can't decrib how good it is. U messed up on a few thing but i'm not judgeing the writting i jugeing the story its self and so far it is i can't find a word for it.
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
U grossed me out and its hard to grose me out. Where did u come up with this.
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far so good.
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it.
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's good. Having him try to control his self is lol. Are they going to? I guess I half to read and find out.
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Love your stories they are so much more detailed than mine and you do reserch! If you ever write a book I know you'll win alot of prizes for it. keep up the good work
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN!!! I FUCKING LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!! THIS CHAPTER ROCKS!!!
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February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Addictive. This damn story is addictive. While not eloquently written, it has such imagination that I am highly impressed. I can't believe there's 25 more chapters! Whew... I almost thought I was there... Oh well... here goes 25 more chapters....On to Kagome Returns...
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love Your Story. Its Insane. Very Adorable the way they keep slowly comming together. well ta ta for now. keep up the good work
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December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've read this on another site. I think it was a single spark. I am so glad this has so many more chapters that one. Although the story is great, I think you should go over it because you have alot of spelling mistakes.