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I can't beleive what you're planning to do to inu and his buddies, whose going to save them if kirara's the only one there not captured, is it gonna be kikyo? or will it be kagura at the cost of her life. oh yeah and what on gilligan's island could drive them apart? I admit you have me stumped, at first I even thought it was waterworld.

Jeff, you better not have Miroku OR Sango, OR inuyasha OR kouga killed. You better not have rin or shippou killed either. DON"T PUT GILLIGAINS ISLAND IN THEMG, MG, THAT WOULD BE WORLD CHAOUS!!!!!!! Omg, jeesh, this story is kewlio, but omg omg. SHAVING KAGOME BALD, ARE YOU KIDDING *uses fox powers and banishes you, forcing you to write more and more to this story. MORE MORE MORE grrrrrr* I will turn you into a computer! HAHAHAHA! 0+ <---see that sign, I'm female, and grrr if you ever did that, *thinks of the most colorful thing to say, but also doesn't want to anger Sir Jeff*

Grrr.... I hope this reveiw goes through. *crosses fingers*
First and fore most, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Don't let those mother fuckers touch Sess! 0.0;;; I'll get hella wickn yon your ass jeffs if he's harmed in anyway!!! oh wait... *thinks about it* eh... although that would be interesting. I mean, it seems everyone else raped him why not humans. JK. It's your story, do what you gotta do.
Secondly, on what should Kagome do (these are only suggestions) A. She can use her torn robe, dropped it on one bastard to blind him and shank the other asshole. The blinded dude will probably struggle with the robe, she can kill him (which I hope) or she can use him to take her back to the leader (of course gagged and bound on his tighties not so whities)

I have one question, does the elven song work at all?

Again, I must say your stories are capitivating! Damn you, I have stumbs now because your stories kept me in supsense I forgot to stop biting my nails until it was too late. There fore you must write more!!! More I say! What are you doing still reading this? WRITE!!!!

~V~ may the fluffiness be with you

LMAO i cant wate to see the next world lol oh all that can go wrong there lol again nicly done Jeff



Naheta

that chapter was so great. I just luved how u did it. Keep writting.

Time for HUMOR? So now we're taken to "HOLLYWORLD"? Well, if the couple gets tired of Gilligan's Isle, maybe they can island hop over to Fantasy Island? (har har) So if their powers change among the worlds, how much power can the two posess in a world of unlimited imagination. BTW, would have liked to have read your original story idea sounds interesting, exept the bald kagome.

TY I always find what you write to be totally absorbing.
You go "all out" to create background info for each world.

Can't wait to find out what world you drop them on next.
*rolls eyes and shakes head* not Gilligan's Island!
as always I can't wait to read S'more.

maybe you can use the lab rat idea in a Roswell type setting

hey this stroy is pretty good i wonder what inu guy is thinking right now HEY! why don't you write back on them ... "thats so evil"

Jeffs! I know I've been a tad busy, and haven't reviewed in a while, but please give Sesshoumaru a break! Well, now that I think about it, you most likely will. Oh, and did you really want someone else to take up the vampire world sidestory? If so, then I have an idea, but only if you give the ok. Great couple of chapters!

This review is bit late...I know, but hope Kagome fights. Maybe Kagome could use her robe to cover the head of one as a distraction long enough to kill the other and still catch the second one by surprise. A good self defense move is an upward open palm butt to the nose. Thanks for the great story, too