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I wonder if these html tags work for the font besides bold, underline, and italics I shall experement on jeffs page b/c i love him so much for the fanfics that he writes. HmmI wonder let's see, if it doesn't work then that's ok, b/c it probably wouldn't anyway. Neways, jeff, marvalous story, and, if you put gilligan in there *tries to reframe from laughing, failing misrably* I'de die. HAHAHAHA, he screws everything up so bad. My favorite episode was with that one indian girl, the fat one, who wanted to marry gilligan and everyone thought it was the old dude she wanted to marry. SHE ATE the lipstick. lol. rofl. lhao. anyways, catch yah later. chao

~unokitsune

RED hair , RED hair, Ginger's not a blonde. Well, this ought to prove interesting, having one cold lord among a group of imbeciles. I could picture him just killing them to have them out of the way, and then revive them when it's time to touch the cube, much like you commented on what he'd do with Kagome in this story of yours, were Sessh to act true to the series character. I smirked with agreement on your comment of the professor, but that's what allowed it to go on. Really enjoyed Shippo and Rin in this chapter, and even Jaken's lines. Until April, thanks

oh wow gillagans island this is gonna be rich

Where would we be without Shippo and Rin.
sad, cute and sweet momment with those two.

Thank you for sharing, I look forward to reading S'more.

Update update update!!!!!!!!! Thanks.

Ja Ne

I love this story. The way you tell a story is exquisite. I've read almost all of your stories, and have yet to find one I didn't like. Just one thing though. Please let Sesshoumaru kill Gilligan. Please, oh please.

My GOD! I love your story! Keep goin!
Kagome and Sesshomaru need to get closer!!!

I do appericate the extra detail you put into this chapter. Action is important but so is the settinghen hen the characters are walking through the forest, I like reading/seeing there are leaves on the trees. I can actually understand the reviewer's concern about Sesshoumaru being too dog like... Seriously for a while there I thought he was going to start humping a leg or something. No offense.. I'm glad his canine nature was mentioned less in this chapter. A thing I would sugest anu mau may take this advice or no. Ever see Sliders? This is sort of what this story reminds me of. Every once in a while they would slide through worlds that were not on camera. The viewer simply knows they went there, but nothing important happened during the time. I would, so that you're not writing a 100 chapter fic.. which is there is nothing wrong with that mind you, is to have them do likewise. Briefly mention.. that they were in a world in which bunnies were the dominate life form.. okay nothing that silly...but you get the drift. It would allow some time to realistically pass.

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Oh, you SO did not go there!!! ACK! ACKKK!
(Still, love the fic!)

Gilligan's Island is probably where they are at, ne? But I was thinking...If you've ever seee Moe Movie WATERWORLD, you could probably do something with that sort. If you haven't, then totally forget the idea.