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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! the lemonz finally here! ^^ it's been like.. forever.. they've been soo close to it.. but always got interrupted or sumthing... =]
maybe they should talk about their relationship between the three. [kagome, sesshoumaru, and inuyasha].. i mean after all, she will have to choose between them, right? [unless you want her to be mated to both] then again, she might not have to choose.. won't inuyasha just get with another character? and her being with sesshoumaru is inevitable.. but still, they should still discuss it.
update soon! ^^
maybe they should talk about their relationship between the three. [kagome, sesshoumaru, and inuyasha].. i mean after all, she will have to choose between them, right? [unless you want her to be mated to both] then again, she might not have to choose.. won't inuyasha just get with another character? and her being with sesshoumaru is inevitable.. but still, they should still discuss it.
update soon! ^^
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i have 3 ideas for what kag could call sesshomaru 1)lover 2)she could explain what boyfriend means 3)fiance
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
they could talk about having pups and sessy meeting kags family
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How about beloved?
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
instead of companion call them "beneficial friends" ^_^
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You did NOT put them on gilligan's isle! Oh god, you couldn't be that cruel! *DIES* Oh, what is sesshoumaru gonna do when Gilligan comes stumbling across them? :P LOL.
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude! You gotta write another chapter before I go bonkers!
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You should do a world that.. hmm.. How do I word this? The world is one with Kagome's or Sesshomaru's past, hopefully Kagome's since Kagome has some of Sesshomaru's memories of when he was younger and such, and Sesshomaru wants to get to know Kagome better. Yeah.. uh.. that's all. Hope you understand what I'm saying.
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHEN I FIRST STARTED TO READ YOUR STORY IT WAS A LITTLE BORING, BUT AS I READ MORE AND MORE I GOT CAUGHT UP IN THE WORLD THAT YOU CREATED. IF THIS FANFICTION WAS A BOOK I WOULD NOT BE ABLE TO PUT IT DOWN UNTIL I WAS DONE WITH IT AND WOULD BE BEGGING FOR MORE. PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON, AND BRING THEM CLOSER TOGETHER BECAUSE I WANT LEMON AND LOTS OF IT.
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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HIYA! i've finally caught up with your stories, I've printed out from "jealousy" to chapter 44! It took about 300 pages roughly! But i'm back! and I'd like to tell you that your very creative and are hitting right on the spots on historic events. I really like how you have the whole story plot down, and I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this story, I'm very happy that your not like most authors.. *points to herself* ^^' that leave the readers hanging for a month or so.
I really like this story because of it's detail, I enjoy reading this type of stuff too! Erotic erotic erotic!!! haha^^
I also like how you portray Sesshomaru's persona' it's very cool, Kagome's such a sexy cutey pie! >,< It makes me like this couple more. And I think that you really do touch on the right issues on how Kagome doens't want fights and how Sesshomaru wants to win her over the right way and make her love him more than Inuyasha. I just think it's awfully noble and well... to be truthfull I really cried when he told her he's willing tore hre her with his brother.
It really gives true name to "The heart of a dog" If ya get me. And I also think it's SO SO SO SO Kawaii that he plays around with her and doens't show his childhood with anyone else but with Kagome. Also with his past. I think it is sweet as well.
I just really like reading this story so much and even though i know I might have you sickened to deatth tth this long review, I do wish you'd update again! It found this a real treat, you should be proud of yourself for being such a good writter. It makes me realize how much help I need as a writer, you make a very good roll-mode to follow!^,^ *nods*
I look forward to see what happends next in this wonderful saga, I do I do I do!!*jumps around* haha
Well, I guess i'll shut up and let you continue. *takes out a whip* C'mon Jeff! *clashes her whip* UPDATE! UPDAOW!!OW!! :D
Plz update soon!! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ! *jumps around with pompoms* plz plz plz! ^^
I really like this story because of it's detail, I enjoy reading this type of stuff too! Erotic erotic erotic!!! haha^^
I also like how you portray Sesshomaru's persona' it's very cool, Kagome's such a sexy cutey pie! >,< It makes me like this couple more. And I think that you really do touch on the right issues on how Kagome doens't want fights and how Sesshomaru wants to win her over the right way and make her love him more than Inuyasha. I just think it's awfully noble and well... to be truthfull I really cried when he told her he's willing tore hre her with his brother.
It really gives true name to "The heart of a dog" If ya get me. And I also think it's SO SO SO SO Kawaii that he plays around with her and doens't show his childhood with anyone else but with Kagome. Also with his past. I think it is sweet as well.
I just really like reading this story so much and even though i know I might have you sickened to deatth tth this long review, I do wish you'd update again! It found this a real treat, you should be proud of yourself for being such a good writter. It makes me realize how much help I need as a writer, you make a very good roll-mode to follow!^,^ *nods*
I look forward to see what happends next in this wonderful saga, I do I do I do!!*jumps around* haha
Well, I guess i'll shut up and let you continue. *takes out a whip* C'mon Jeff! *clashes her whip* UPDATE! UPDAOW!!OW!! :D
Plz update soon!! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ! *jumps around with pompoms* plz plz plz! ^^