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for Kagome! Where are you!

by jeffshelton

person KFC
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yesh it's me, Kentucky fried Chipmunk ^.^ This was a great chapter, and yes I read all of it hehe I would answer your question but I dunno, it's your story go with what you want to do. Write another chapter soon. *Hands jeffs a cake and hops away*
person unokitsune
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, that toto thing that came from the wizard of oz, why did sessy call kagome bitch? please inform me sensei
person wildkatz88
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
im confused........why is sess mad that she said toto ive got the feeling were not in kansas anymore? he called her bitch...why? is there something im not understanding? Ahhhhhh!!!!! ok anyway, loveing the story.
person wildkatz88
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh i get it now....i feel stupid. funny:D
person snowcat
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the laughs, LOL!!! Awww, was Sesshy upset? But... *taps finger on chin* was he more upset over being refered to as a dog form, or was it that his ego was bruised being asimilated with a runt of a dog instead of a thrningning attack dog. I have an idea on Sessh's revenge, but will e-mail it to you, K? On a more serious note, if I were Kagome, I'd want Sessh to tell me everything possible about the background of his other two wives, and learn as much as I could about the nature of female demons, to know what to be prepared for, whether she ends up living with Sessh or not. Just my thoughts, not to influence your story, CUZ IT'S TOO GOOD AS IS!
person Kentucky Fried Chipmunk
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DUDE! Write more! Great chapter, I wish you woulde gie given a bit more detail.
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL! I got it now! OMG! It took me this long to figure out why she said it, it never occured to me at the time! That was funny! As to what he should do? I haven't a clue since it took me this long to figure it out. Heh heh! Lol! That was funny, real funny! ^_^!
person CeltGdds
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think he should question her while slowly torturing her into her explaination of that wonderful phrase...make it lemony fresh
please
person blackshadowfox
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehe jeff :) let them go * cough cough * rideing * cough cough * ;-)

anywayz, awesome chapter and thanks for the e-mail again. and hey how old are you anwayz???
person sam
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your story is very good. could you maybe do a world with yu yu hakisho.