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for Kagome! Where are you!

by jeffshelton

person Persephone of Abydos
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. XD It is seriously one of my favorites. It's very well-written and has an awesome plot. Please continue!
person Niji-neko
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM

You´ve done nothin´wrong!
Nothing!!! at all! Man, youre such a great writer ( and i absolutelly mean it )
Dont you dare get things like that get you.! [ Nah you be cool and continue with this wonderful piece]

Ja
person Striking Falcon
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi duckie! So sorry to have been away for so long. If it means anything, I've read at least six chapters tonight. I'll spare you the details, but every single chapter was great (though I wasn't expecting anything less from you!) As for the drop in reviews, I've noticed that with my stories too. I think the reason may be finals, which a lot of people are getting ready for. I know my cousin (and lemon muse) has his first test the second week of May. So that may be the reason! Once again, cool stuff and if you have time, please tell me what you think of the spin off I did of your vampire world. It's called A Light in Guiding Darkness, and I feel like you should at least accept it before I continue it. Thanks bunches!!!
person Tomoe
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I've read your last two chapter in a row, and took my sweet time for it too... I like this world a lot because it allowed you to develop their relationship so much. I like nothing better than a mastely dly done caracter development and this story is the best I've ever read also in that aspect.
I would enjoy Sesshoumaru teaching shape shifting to Kagome, that would give way to endless interesting situations, and I'm sure Shippo will be delighted!
And thank you for explaining Sesshou. I was hoping without hopes to learn a little more about him in "A Shard In Kyoto", and now you told me more than I hoped to learn. I'm just a bit confused about Kagome's comment about his arm missing. He dit have two in that story, wich Kagome dismissed since she saw Sesshoumaru using a human or youkai arm.
I'm, as always, eagerly waiting for the next chapter!
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sckrew Kagome! SESSHOMARU IS MINE! Jeff, if i didn't know any better, I'de swear you're married and have kids. But that is only my oppion, you seem so educated.
person heninu111
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yaaaaaa!!! star wars arc cool. Still loving ur story keep writing.
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
* reads over fic again * Saw nothing that offended me, I read stuff that made me laugh, and stuff that shocked me, but nothing offended me really. Though I know Kagome's giving Sesshoumaru a bit of loving while in dog form, would shock some and offend many, strangely it didn't me. Normally I would have stopped right then and there and never read anything by you again, but I didn't. Maybe beacause I almost expected it. Anyhoo, it was a great chapter. Until next time! ^_^
person Rem
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
damn them lik lik like rabits
person theMaven
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would have to say that was the most INTERESTING love scene I've ever read, lol. As usual, this chapter was full of a healthy and amusing amount of sexiness and silliness. Kagome's "dog demon" suit, lol. That was an original, and fitting way for Sess to get revenge.

And the Professor was always my favorite character on that show. You've made Sess and I have something in common. ^__^

DO keep up the good work--theMaven :)
person unokitsune
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, now I get it, I'm officially dumb as of now. Dawwwwww, cute chapter. Kagome should become like some sort of dog demoness that way they can make love in their true shape