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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I've read countless storys of Kagome dealing with some tragic event, or hurting herself. I think that it makes more sense for Inuyasha to be dealing with things like that, because of his history. I really don't think there are enough storys out that talk about how it must feel to burtalized the way he was...I'm happy that you are exploring the pain behind the mask that Inuyasha wears, even if it is very sad. And one more thing I don't think that your writing skills are bad, in fact I think they are very good...email me when you update again please *Miss_Marilyn69@yahoo.com*
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, it starting to be a dark fic has you promise. I am looking forward where this story will lead. Update soon
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I Believe you hit it on the head kitty demon nobody focuses on the inuyasha being a half-breed & tormented past thats why he doesn't open up to kagome more. I think your story is excellent so far please contiune to post more chapters!!!
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
talk about dark and angsty! its real good, though. one question- when does Kagome come into all of this? i hope you plan on updating like real soon, cuz im lovin it already. Usually i'm not one for the dark stuff, but this one i like. please tell me it ends a little happily for inuyasha! maybe arealization that he's not as bad as everyone says cuz Kag loves him? anyway, your story, you write! Oh- just don't pull a fast one and hook him up with kikyo- she should be dead, like how many attempts ago? I think four in the manga by now?
--keep it hot!
--keep it hot!
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow your writing is very pretty, its almost make me see an image in my head...I wish n wrn write like you.
However I dont really think Inu would hurt himself.....cause tats kinda like the cowards way out and inu
isnt thos type.........
but i love your writing though !!!!
However I dont really think Inu would hurt himself.....cause tats kinda like the cowards way out and inu
isnt thos type.........
but i love your writing though !!!!