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for You Can't Help Me

by kittydemon

person Creativity
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I love your story. It's well-written, the titles are beautiful and match each chapter perfectly, and everyone has stayed totally in character, which isn't that easy in fanfiction. Now, I just have one question...Why haven't you updated? Seriously, I really want to read the next chapter, and it's been months since you've updated (or weeks, I don't really keep track). Please update soon? Call upon the power of your muse and write, and just keep writing til your done...that's it, go ahead. I'll keep checking in!
person dadsnavygirl831
schedule December 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo Inuyashaaaaaaaa!!! No Kikyo and Inuyasha pairings they're so annoying puh-leeeeeeeeeeeze no Inu/Kikyo pairings!! Will our dear beloved Inuyasha be okay?! Will Kagome find him!? Will they get together in the end!? *hysterical* WILL OUR SWEET DEAR BELOVED FAVORITE HALF DOG DEMON DOG INUYASHA DIE?!?!?!?!
So many coincidences today. When I went to read this, Evanescence's song tourniquet came on. Wierd, eh? PLEEEEEEASE NO INU/KIKYO PAIRINGS AND HAVE INUYASHA LIIIIIIIIIIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTEEEEEERRRRRRRRR!! PUH-LEEZ I BEG OF YOU, YOUR HOLY GRAND AUTHORESS!!! *sobs*
O_o Yeah, I'm mentally unstable tooooo! ^^_^^^^ Ohhhh, lookit the alien smiley face....
person ugly
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
plz oh plz update on this as soon as possible, I feel sorry for kagome, I like how you make it feel like the actual show! It's awesome, I feel that same helpless feeling I do here then when I watch the show, I hope you update soon so this weird feeling will go away! lol your an awesome writter and i really like your work.

Oh! hmmm well I really don't like Kikyou because she's just using Inuyasha in the other series, but I hope you don't pair them up together, It hurts me to see Kagome in pian, She's my fav character!;///;

;///;Nyu, poor Kagome-chan.

Welp I hope you update soon, and try e-mailing me if you do! PLZ PLZ PLZ?
person emily
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD i am speachless....the y..iy..its so sad...and the sadest part is when it ends!!! i love your story!
person *sniff*
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
can you hand me some tissue
person dadsnavygirl831
schedule December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOWWW......you know, this is really good. I think you should make one chapter a songfic with Evanescence's Tourniquet. That's a great song. You can find the lyrics at leoslyrics.com. I've had thoughts about Inuyasha hurting himself. I'm not an author anywhere and I haven't written anything like that yet. I don't think I'd ever post it.
Your story is amazing. I really hope you continue this awesome ficcie! ^_^ Will Inuyasha die in the end or no?
person New Fan
schedule December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Inu killing himself i do not think so, but if he hang around the dead women I guess that would make anyone kill themselve with her depressing view on life. I hope that Kag can help him. Update soon.
person emily
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD!!!! update update update!!! i have to read more...its so sad..and so good- update soon!
person Suzuko
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy reading this story though I hope Kagome can do the exact opposite of the title. write more soon
person lizzy
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
... more... more more more more...

:: sniff :: wanna read more!

(.... **is not a good reviewer**)

... i like the story soooo much.