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person Taiki
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Liana.... I hope she will find a place to stay soon... It was a short but good chapter. ^^ I cant wait to see what happens next. And I like the wolf *ggg* I wonder how long this story will be. Will te timeline meet up to the precence of Captive Soul? *hugs and love* Taiki PS: Beware of my Tickleattacks Ras *gg*
person snowcat
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter, YEAH! I'm having a hard time waiting how this story will turn and and how it ties into "Captive Soul" (cuz it only makes sense that this one needs to be completed before "Captive Soul" can be completed, hai?) Back to "willow" in the meaning of the name; been thinking about willows and it's truly a remarkable tree! Most people admire it as a graceful and delicate tree, but if you've ever tried to irradicate one, I've found them to be root invasive (allowing them withstand the very worst of storms), resilliant (they have ways of recreatinf sef severed roots), and these will be appropriate attributes for a hanyou to have inorder to survive the obvious hostililty ahead. Inspiration for thoughts, maybe.
person KhellendrostheDragon
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi Ras, I'm loving this story too.I really feel for Liana and Maru though,being turned away and being called down like that. I hope you update soon.

Huggles;
Khell
person Hentai Jane
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved ch 2. It's very sad, but every cloud has a silver lining right? Maybe she'll find someone to love her and the baby.
Hugs
HJ
person Cassie
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!! I love the story all I say is more,more more I love it, I love it. Keep up the good work. And again I love it, I love it, I love it.
person Diane
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far but I am confused about where Liana & the baby comes from if this is a contiuation of Captured Soul which is a Sess/Rin fic.
person dragonflyelj
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey you! so happy you updated, Poor liana, Poor maru, I am glad she will get farther away from (Can't remember his name right now, the bastard), and Kouga was so nice not to kill her! ^.^ Can't wait for you to update again, maybe I will see you in woohoo soon. Ja!
person dragonflyelj
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am so excited that you started a story about the baby! I was wondering what happened to him, and where he i in in Captive Soul. Can't wait to read more!
person The Dragon
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! Maru/Liana's story! I've been waiting for this one! I like his name, and I like the whole story already, even with just one chapter! When Maru gets older, I think that piece of cloth that Sess gave Liana that is currently keeping him warm should be an important part of his attire. Maybe like a fluffy shoulder or something. AND, when his big and strong enough, He should go and rip Shi'an's(leopard dude, I can't remember if that's how you spelled his name) bloody throat out! Being so horrible to his Mother and Father, the jerk deserves it! :[ Plus, we can't leave out the quest to find his Father, ne? ;)
person Lady Knightstar
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful start. Your such a good writter. I look forward to your next update.