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September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, certainly different. You had a few gramatical errors, but nothing to really worry about.
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March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like the idea for this story plz continue
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
keep on writing this is a very good story
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December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story. is there gonna be anymore chapters or sequels to it. this is just cool