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for Bankotsu's Harem

by dragonflyelj

person Kawool
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG ! i forgot to review previouschappie( i loved it) !!! Gomen nasai !
person Kawool
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok here is my review for Kag's chapter .... What a whore lol ! Looks like Jak doesn't really mind *hehe*
As usual keep up the good work !
Huggles

Yur fan n friend

Kawool
person May
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...Very good fic idea. Very original. I like.
person Rasberries
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
IIIIEEEE!!!! Yes, Me like it much! Oh, Man was that a hot scene. *wipes forehead* whew, got me sweating there, girl.
Where did you imagination come up with that????!!! Gah I wish mine was that...uh...graphic...*sigh* "I never dream about the good stuff." Oh, well, At least I have good authoresses to envision for me what my PG-13 thoughts can't put out. lol.


Ras~~~~~~~~~
person KhellendrostheDragon
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Dragon! I love the story...I read all eight chappies at once,I was so engrossed in it that when I finished the last one I was disappointed that there wasn't anymore...lol. I'm curious to see what else is in store for the girls...and even though I have never seen Bankotsu,he sounds like he's a real hottie!

Until next time,Huggles;
Khell
person animechick262003
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Would have reviewed earlier but was at work..heh heh. Anyways MAY I PLEASE BE KIKYO THIS ONCE DAMN YOU *WITH LOVE OF COURSE* MUhahahahaha I love this fic. I want to be a harem girl tooooooooooo. WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY WHy must I exist in the real world when ther are soooooo many bishies in the not so real world. Cursed existence BLAHHH!!! Oh well. *SIGH* I will be animated inh my next life. Anyways goood job! LOVED LEMON With Kik and Ban *DROOLS* Keep writing and I'll keep right on reviewing.
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice, Very Nice! scene with Kikyo and Bankotsu. Ooo nakie Bankotsu...loved how you described his body. *drooling now* I like how you are easing into the couplings, makes it very interesting. The scented oils was a good touch. It set the mood perfect for kiknd bnd ban. Will await to see who else gets heated up. lol


Ras~~~~~~~~~
person animechick262003
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I want to know if I can please be Kikyo? Um cause I thought the doctor was sexy when I saw him in the anime. Not his crazy face but the one when he's calm. I can also see a kikyo Ban lemon..ummmm well hah.. good job. Im abou to read next chapter will let you know what I think. Huggles and come back to woo hoo soon.
person black//rose
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, i just wanted to tell i do love this story and i can't wait to read more...please update soon
person ifrita
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
really original
love this harem thing hehe

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