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for Bankotsu's Harem

by dragonflyelj

person animechick262003
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Soon that will be you beneath me!!!! OH MY GODSSSSSSSSSSSS ..can I be beaneath him?????? Am I in next chapter Beneath him?????? PLease say I am ...Sigh I know wishful thinking. Good chapter girly on to the next one..
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fic. Perfect for getting swept away in. I like it and your writing is quiet good also. Sometimes I feel sorry for the girls then something erotic happens and it just gets hot! heh heh. Think I will go get me a cup of coffee and read some more of it. I may put some comments from time to time on certain chaps.

Later.

Fallen_Angel
person Soranji
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol yummy
person Tom
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your long absence has given me time to think. I reccomend Killing off Inu Yasha and Naraku at the same time. Follow it up with adding to Bankotsu's Harem Kanna who I never see any lemons for, and Kagura as I want to see her bewail her new imprisonment. Lastly Bankotsu and his men examine Kagome's textbooks on a rainy day when everyone of the girls is sick, for want of anything else to. This leads to an interrogation of Kagome that leads somewhere. Semper Fidelis till next time.
person undecided
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story please update
person animchick262003
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*HUggles* Loved Latest Chaps J. Very hot indeed!!!
person Rachel Blaise Zabini
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool fic :) Continue soon!
person Sara-sama
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I had to read all chapters!! OMG - this is a GOOOOD fic!!! I have all the eps. up to 135, so I know exactly what you're talking about! I wonder what Inuyasha and Miroku will do once they realize Sango and Kagome were kidnapped, and what has been going on?? How will this changeir eir relationships? And Ayame's with Kouga?? Please keep writing more, I want to read more of it!!!
person Naheta
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice chap keep up the great work

Naheta
person Khellendros
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Dragon...I finally got caught up,YAY! Hahaha, loved the way Kag handled Jakotsu,that was good...bet he's thinking twice about just having guys...lol Sango...O_O well who knew? and poor Ayame...what does Ban have in store for her next?

See you next time,Huggles;
Khell