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for Bankotsu's Harem

by dragonflyelj

person stayingput29
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes Sango wanted it.... he he... and I am sure she will want it again.... once you get the big O or keep going back for more.... woohoo....

Huggles
Mules
person stayingput29
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
chap 10 review. .. UMMMMMMM!!!! I think we all like a little show every now and then... woohoo... Kikyo sure didn't mind put one one on for her.... he he.... and with a hottie like that.... I don't think I would mind either... but any howdy whoo..... guesss who is almost cought up... Great story enjoying it very much sooo glad almost cought up.... but now that means that Fly Girl must update again real soon... he he

Huggles
Mules
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved the lemon between Bankotsu and Ayame. It was very well done. You got me hankering for that hunk now. *one of the few men in InuYasha seen almost completely naked.* I just wish so wish, that Rumiko would just once make Sessy almost naked. Now that I would pay big money to see. Ah but alas, such a regal figure cannot be portrayed as such. Drat. Now about that cliffy...ahem....uh...okay, I will give it to ya. The authoress has a right to do such a thing to us poor unsuspecting readers. hmmmm....I think I have done it once or twice too though. *grins evily* It's such a rush. Weeeeee...

scarecrow smiles in the spring wind
person Stayingput29
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Review for chap five.... I like the training chap and want to read more... and Pig... yes that he seems to be... and Inu will he be comming back into this story... Miroku???? huh huh.... just woundering... but anyway great chap and now must move on while I have a little peace to read....lol

Huggles
Mules
person Stayingput29
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG.... I made it.... FINALLY... started this thing mounths agao and had to go back and reread... but on chap three so here is review... and Mules is going to nit pick on ya...lol.... The note.... I don't understand the note... the girls didn't have time to get the boys but had time to write a note.... Come on even the boys are that smart.... LMAO....

Huggles girly just picken.... I liked chap and loved the whole set up.... these guys just snagging up girls from where ever.... To Funny.... I LOVE IT.... when they coming to snag me... Huh... Huh.... must know...

Any ways as you can WAY behind on this... so bare with me while I catch up... always playing catch up I am....

Huggles
Mules
person stayingput29
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chap four review.... I think it is going great.... you have a lot of emotion going on right now and I think doing a fab job with it.... LMAO at the Kagome sack thing.... yelp she should have left it on.... so Now I must move on to see what is to come next... wounderful job girly keep it up...

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Mules
person Numisma
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you're evil and we love you for it. we are also evil to know that you didn't abandon this fic after all. yay! more chappies on the way, even if they are spaced out cuz you'll be so busy ;)
person ..ACK!
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY! *pats you on the head for job well done* But.. *stabs you with a rusty metal spork named Sebastion for cliffie* NO! BAD AUTHOR! THIS IS MY POT PIE! Okay, had had best get that next chapter up pretty damn soon. Or I will be forced to smite you, I am God, you see. Yes. GOD..Dess.. XD I CALL BANKOTSU HE IS MINE! >.eh. eh. Wo0t.
person Patricia
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My husband Tom is currently in Iraq, but he'll be back.
person Sara-sama
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW - that was a great chapter!! I love your work, and this is no different! I knew Ayame had a thing for Bankotsu, who wouldn't? So Kagome *who is trying to keep her virginity* is left, and I can't remembf anf anyone else is. I wonder what's going to happen with that situation - as well asInuyInuyasha, Miroku, Kouga *he does realize Ayame's gone, right?* and who knows who else hunting to search for their women??? I can't wait to read more!